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scribblinlenore

SGA Porn: Spirit of Adventure

Jul 14, 2006 17:59

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norwich36 July 14 2006, 22:56:41 UTC

My SGA knowledge is limited to about 3 episodes and a bunch of McShep stories I've read here and there, but though I can't comment on characterization, I really loved this. Very, very hot! I really love when you write threesomes.

scribblinlenore July 16 2006, 12:44:43 UTC

I wasn't really going for much in the way of characterization, I must admit. If you thought it was hot, my work here is done! *g*

I do raally enjoy writing threesomes. Like...a lot.

no_detective July 14 2006, 23:09:35 UTC

Oh, my dear, that was... not the sort of thing that would make me cry. ;-)

What a lovely threesome, and what fabulous power dynamic! Of course, Elizabeth has a strap-on; and of course, she and Teyla make a great team. *eg* I also LOVE it that John gets fucked even when he's having hetero sex (and guh, so well!). Poor John, he's so obvious! No wonder he can only get vanilla sex with chicks from other planets; everybody on Atlantis knows what he REALLY needs. *g*

For some reason, Teyla was the hottest, um, element of the story for me.

And may I say how much I like your author's note? Very, very nice.

scribblinlenore July 16 2006, 12:47:14 UTC

Hee! I'm glad there are no tears. Although it is probably going to make Caro cry, just because she hates Elizabeth so much.

No wonder he can only get vanilla sex with chicks from other planets; everybody on Atlantis knows what he REALLY needs.

*laughs* It's so true! He's so transparent.

sherrold had a GREAT idea for a little twist on the author's note. I really might have to write it. It would be so funny!

logovo July 14 2006, 23:10:33 UTC

Yay! Quite hot and mmmm, lovely images here. I had not read a fic with the 3 of them together. How strange, I may have been missing out.

scribblinlenore July 16 2006, 12:48:09 UTC

I never considered this threesome before I saw that picture. It was just...a really, really GOOD picture! *g*

improperlydone July 14 2006, 23:27:46 UTC

*glurble*

I'm still trying to, um... Words?

Yeah. See, it was all hot, but when the drawer opened, my brain leaked out of my ears.

I just... OMG. I'm going to have to give you real feedback in a bit. I think I need to read this again, another 50 thousand times. Yeah. That's what I need. That and a pack of cigarettes.

scribblinlenore July 16 2006, 12:49:10 UTC

Thanks for the inspiration! I can't tell you how long I sat there and stared at that picture on your LJ and thought: "Sheppard in the middle, hell yeah!" *g*

meret July 14 2006, 23:45:52 UTC

I *LOVE* this!!!! Femslash isn't my thing, but WOW! So very, very hot! Definitely pushes my femdom buttons. *g* I hope you'll post this at atlantiskink

scribblinlenore July 16 2006, 12:50:49 UTC

I'm not really that into femslash either, but when I saw that picture I thought: Elizabeth and Teyla do have things in common, both strong women, trying to lead their respective people, and they'd both be great at manhandling John!

Uh, yeah, femdom is a button for me, too. *g*

So glad you liked this, doll! Oh, and I did post it to atlantiskink. Thanks for the suggestion!