5 Things Meme-of the Ficlet Variety

Aug 04, 2013 13:03


This entry is part 44 of 51 in the series 365 Challenge
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Re: Forgetfulness Is Its Own Absolution [4/4] scribble_myname August 13 2013, 23:26:46 UTC
I edited the wrong one. It was supposed to be both their top four. Grrr! And there were like four other typos I fixed in the .doc after I posted this. LJ disallows editing comments that have replies. Thanks for catching that. It's the top four of both teams: Wolf, Whisper, Storm, Maker and Shift, Kilter, Sear, Justus.

I will write that scene from Justus' perspective. You can keep an eye out for it. I was kinda surprised when the whole thing came out from Shift.

Will have to work in a snippet on the fourth aspect. Didn't quite realize I'd dropped that ball. It's a hard one to one-liner, so I'll get it back to you after I mull it a little bit.

I don't know if I should, but I really liked when Shift told Justus he'd rebuild his life after this, where she basically gave him no choice but to do it.

I don't know if I should like it either, but this is the Shift that makes it hard for those who are really close to her to hate her. She's all in when it comes to protecting and caring for her own. It's why she fascinates me, why I find myself as sucked into her as my characters are.

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Re: Forgetfulness Is Its Own Absolution [4/4] thecatisacritic August 14 2013, 03:32:11 UTC
Ah, okay. Yeah, I hate the way you can't edit them after the reply. It's so annoying.

Cool. I look forward to seeing that.

I know you've referenced it before, the fourth aspect and the other ranks as well, but I don't think there was much detail on fourths or I forgot, possibly, but I'd welcome more clarification there. I almost always do, makes me feel like such an idiot needing it all spelled out.

Yeah. Those kinds of characters can be strangely fascinating. I just realized I was writing someone with similar aspects (not Zi this time) and went, "Oh. Oops."

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Re: Forgetfulness Is Its Own Absolution [4/4] scribble_myname August 14 2013, 15:01:14 UTC
Don't know if you got the alerts, but I did get the fourth note edited in there. It's not good enough-I'd need to write a ficlet focusing on a fourth being a fourth-but for a one-liner it's as close as I'm going to get.

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Re: Forgetfulness Is Its Own Absolution [4/4] thecatisacritic August 14 2013, 16:32:03 UTC
It needs a full ficlet, but that helps some. Thanks.

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