Poor Unfortunate Souls, Chapter Eight: The Rotten Houses

[scribal_goddess]

Chapter Eight: The Rotten Houses
Contents and Warnings
Chapter Seven: Wisdom of SightWarnings: Elena Lincoln, child molester, makes an appearance in this chapter. Dr. and Mr. Grey are up a river in Egypt without a paddle. Taylor has PTSD and is still the better man. Panic attack. Mentions of public sex act native to fifty shades canon. Standard

Comments

[scribal_goddess]

It's weird, but I think Grace is the Carlisle of this story. Most of the family problems seem to stem directly from her take on parenting, the denial seems canonically to be coming first from her, it's her interests that define the whole family, and that house... plus, she chose the kids. Carrick is really sort of meek and non-confrontational, and sort of a nonentity in the story, like Esme.

Yeah, when I read about the public handjob in the sporking, I went from 0 to "oh fuck not again, do they both have batteries or something!?" Pretty much anyone not Hellspawn would have been offended; my theory is that he only did it to show the entire goddamn world that Ana is his sex toy.

Yes, Elena is a sneaky manipulative cow.

I'm glad Melty has a fangirl, lol. :D Taylor... well, he's 1) currently armed, 2) still in a situation with threat to his loved ones, if not his own life, due to Grey's blackmail, 3) being forced to sit through one of his triggers for Grey's sick amusement. So yeah, there will be a gun! The poor man's got nothing resembling a chance of healing until Grey gets put away for good.

I'm headed over there right now. :D