fic: discount shot night

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Title: Discount Shot Night
Fandom: Star Trek (Reboot)
Pairing: Kirk/Spock pre-slash; sidelong glance of established Spock/Uhura
Rating: PG-13? Lots of swearing but no actual sex, alas.
Word Count: 5821, fml.
Summary: The first shore leave of the USS Enterprise -- and my first Trek fic. Eek. Part 1 of the Communication series.

Comments

[jedibuttercup]

*lol* This was fun.

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Thanks!

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Aww, thanks! Chekov and Sulu are so awesome in everything they do -- that last scene in the bar with them was a last minute thing because I couldn't just DROP THEM. ...I also imagine Chekov is shirtless when he wandered by.

[ifyouweremine]

LMAO IFLU!!!

THIS. WAS. AWESOME! Laugh-out-loud funny (I particularly loved the continuing "Kirk out" joke) and silly and warm and in-character. I adored all the characters and the way they interacted, especially Kirk and Spock!

Some of my favorite parts were the aforementioned "Kirk out" thing, Pike telling Kirk that Kirk and Spock shouldn't even blink without consulting each other, Kirk holding a contest to make Spock have fun, drunk!Spock falling asleep on Kirk's shoulder(!!!) and basically the whole last part (YAY for the exchange with Scotty and the bed-sharing and Kirk having written a paper on Vulcan hangover remedies LMAO! Also, EEE, I loved how Kirk and Spock woke up, had a snarky conversation, and then went back to bed together all casually, haha, so funny and cute =o).

This fic is so happy-making and lighthearted, I look forward to seeing more from you in this fandom! <33333

ETA: "Be smart; if you can't be smart, be safe; if you can't be safe, name it after me." LOLLLLL YES

ETA AGAIN:
"Human vocal systems are not

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Aww, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not going to lie, the sheep thing was probably my favorite part to write because it's so absurd, Spock and his UNPRONOUNCEABLE NAME whatever. But I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was enormous fun to write! The Trek fandom is so fun from what I've seen of it so far.

[thelilytriad]

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so fun and perfect. there was just so much about this that i loved! it had me giggling and smiling and 'awwing' all over the place.

Kirk out! *snerk*

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So glad!! Thanks for reading!

[kitrona]

Oh my god, this was AWESOME!!! Definitely going in my memories!

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Flattering, thanks so much!