Hide The Tears

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Title: Hide The Tears
Pairing: Benji/Joel
Summary: Angsty sadness... "I can’t look into your eyes and know what you’re thinking. I feel as if my source of oxygen has been cut off. And when you look at me and ask me if I remember the first time we were together, all I can do is nod."
Dedication: Bolero from fd.net, Ashy & Kaysea

Comments

[popgoesthefreek]

"And one day you’ll know why I smiled.
One day you’ll know I smiled to hide the tears."

*tear* that was sooo beautiful. *sob* you dont even know holly anne. *sniffle* there is no way in hell that coulda sucked.

u seriously need to write a novel. *nods*

wow

[anonymous]

that was amazing. Truely... wow. Yeah, I loved it. I was so close to crying.... and I don't usually cry when reading something.. so yeah, feel special. lol. Because it was amazing.

~Vanilla Coke~

Re: wow

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awww thanks for reviewing! *hands you tissue*

[anonymous]

damn you and your ability to make me tear!!

seriously, everything ive read of your makes me come back for more, and you are truly gifted as ^ there said, write a novel!!

keep up those last line things you can do, it just...its brilliant.

(jessvee) <--ha ha you probly think im your stalker now or something. lol

[screamingxstar]

Awww you make me smile!!! ;o) I'm glad you liked the last liney thing lol. I told someone else, I was really considering changing it because I wasn't sure that sounded right. I'm really glad everyone likes it as is though!!!

Hehe my own personal stalker? SWEET!!! I'll even tell you where I live if that helps hahahaha ;)

[anonymous]

oh...my god.

I mean, seriously? can you write any better? no, I don't think so.

can I make sweet love to you like I should for writing that beautiful piece of ficness? and dedicated to me. good lord =*) you own big time.

that was fantastic. wonduhful, wonduhful. write more of everything soon. soon soon! =)

-Bo