So. I put up the second part of Leaving Eden, entitled
The Eve.
I really enjoyed writing this story. ^^x This chapter in particular. I'm just amazed that it was written using pen and paper at midnight; it took so long to get something out of Vincent before that. I actually thought he might come a little easier than Yuffie, because all the first-persons I've done in a while have been guys (Gippal, Nash); but whenever I tried it crumbled. I'm happy I got to write this, anyway. I don't think I've got enough of him to write entirely through his perspective yet, but I'd still like to try sometime.
I need to work on Etiquette, but somehow whenever I sit down to it I'm not sure where to drag the story next. Ack. ^^x