hey, lookie, NEW fic

[scout_kent]

it's . . . disaster!fic (don't say I didn't warn you). feedback of all types welcome.

the formatting got a little wonky when I copied it over here, with a few misplaced paragraphs; please let me know if any thing seems wildly wrong.

"Danny! Let’s go." Maybe the third time would be the charm, but Casey was doubtful. Dan, deep in conversation with a

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[gothams3rdrobin]

Ohh, that was cool! I want to read more! *grins*

[scout_kent]

I think I might have used up all my words, lol!

glad you liked it; I was determined to get the boys into a dangerous situation one way or another.

[scout_kent]

yay, I evoked extravagant use of exclamation marks!

*bounces with excitement*

[quiesce]

Poor hurt boys! In love!

Yay plot and length! Those are two things I've yet to figure out how to do. *applauds you*

But I think my favourite bit was the whole section where Casey's trying to figure out his post-Draft Day relationship with Dan; how things were the same as they were before, and yet very different.

"Lollygagging? My friend, I neither lolly nor gag."
*g*

[scout_kent]

*bows*

I'm quite pleased at managing a bit of plot and length; it was HARD.

And so glad you liked that section; it took forever to write and I was afraid it ended up 'talky' and boring.

[lovethatfusion]

My favorite part was when Pete left to raise llamas. LOL Nice job!

[scout_kent]

It seemed like something Casey would say! Glad you liked it.

[catwalksalone]

Oh god, I really shouldn't read about car wrecks after driving through 70mph winds.

*huggles boys close*

Extra points for use of the word lollygagging (now if you can get nincompoop and discombobulated into your next one...)

[scout_kent]

I'll see what I can do . . .