FFF- related: THE SPOT

[scotianova]

You stare at the spot and freeze not even knowing why exactly you’re feeling so dumbfounded right now. Why are you making such a big deal about a white-grayish spot on your dark blue sheet? It’s not as if it’s something dirty or ugly or as if the laundry has done a poor job. No! It’s just that your man masturbates when you’re not around. So what?

Comments

[sleeper6]

I LOVE THIS!

Love how you started the fic with that one spot in the bed that led to Luke thinking everything including the worst. Poor Reid! I can't believe he was thinking of leaving if he couldn't be with Luke anymore. He changed his message! :(

The angst! The angst! It killed me but it thrilled me too. And Luke's temptation I totally get. And I liked how you wrote snippets of what had happened in the past.

Love how they reconnected in the shower. Really, really enjoyed this.

[scotianova]

He changed his message! :(

...probably he couldn't take it...

thanks for sharing your thoughts!

[fremi08]

Wow, you weren't kidding when you said it was angsty. It was hard to read about Luke's attraction to someone else. But it can happen. What's important is what you about it.
Love how Luke went after Reid to make up.

Thanks, I really liked it!

[scotianova]

Wow, you weren't kidding when you said it was angsty...
sorry ;)

[donia23]

U make me cry every time I read any fic from u ,every time I see u have update u make me happy although my knowing that I will definitely cry in it ,ur vulnerable reid astounds me and make me love him more than i already am

so glad that u reunited them again ,but is it bad from me to be upset that u reunited them so fast? ,although i love luke so much but sometimes he is so idiot (is there anyone sane have a boyfriend like reid and think in another one?!!! i can`t even think about it) ,so i wanted reid to torture luke more before they get back together again

but after all i loved the fic so much and especially this line

Sometimes recognizing the pain you've caused people you love is hurting more than being hurt yourself

perfect line ,touched me so much
thank u for that fantastic fic
♥♥♥

[scotianova]

ur vulnerable reid astounds me and make me love him more than i already am

...SAME HERE ♥

[amyafa]

Wow.

I am so very glad that Luke went after Reid. And didn't wait for him to come back. It was his place to take the step. Glad he didn't wait after he realised how hurt Reid must be.

It's kind off good to see them having troubles.
It's good that both off them realise that they love each other so much that they can go back to being happy together.

Thanks for sharing.

[scotianova]

Thank YOU!

[fan_tan]

It was soul wrenching and beautiful at the same time.

With the way you wrote it I felt Reid’s pain almost physically. Glad that Luke came to his senses in time to save them both.

Thank you!

[scotianova]

what a beautiful user-picture!!!

[fan_tan]

Aww, thank you!!! I took it in my parents' garden))