Why You Should Have A Beta-Reader
Why did this make me laugh so hard?
He looked up and saw Jack, still with white hair, waving at him from the window. "Jack?" Jamie asked as he climbed out of bed. How was he at his window? The tree was nowhere and there was nothing for him to climb on.
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He looked up and saw Jack, still with white hair, waving at him from the window. "Jack?" Jamie asked as he climbed out of bed. How was he at his window? The tree was nowhere and there was nothing for him to climb on.
Emphasis mine, obvs.
This entry was originally posted at http://scorpionvoices.dreamwidth.org/59239.html, where there are
comments.