distractions, distractions

Dec 17, 2011 20:19

Title: 'Tis the season
Pairing: Gen, Youkai Ningen Bem
Word Count: 1,400
Genre: fluff
A/N: Written for Pat ♥♥ *throws snowball of condensed love~* :B this is what happens when you ask me to elaborate #yourfault Any corrections are welcomed! m(_ _)m

Summary: Bem wants a merry Christmas.

'Tis the season )

ynb, ilu ♥, fic

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misao_duo December 18 2011, 13:49:33 UTC

*catches snowball of condensed love and puts it on a glassbox that goes in the fridge*

Obviously I need to ask you to elaborate on stuff more often. I mean, look at this, one little off comment about how i totally wanted to see Bem having a Christmas and you go and write Christmas for the Youkai Family T_____T ♥

And there's so much to love here (as is usual with your fics). Allow me to quote some stuff back at you like a moron :B

"They might not have a tree or stockings to line their chimney - they don't have a chimney at all - but they do have each other. They have a family and that's one thing they can and will celebrate despite the lack of ornaments."

THEY HAVE A FAMILY ♥
that is such a good point to start. that the reason why they would celebrate this date is that they have each other even if lots of other things are lacking.
and of course Bem would want to celebrate them.

"In the back of his mind, Bem thinks that there's something poetic about a demon transforming into an angel"

that's because there is.
lovely metaphor you got there.

"You have to! My angel is lonely on its own. It needs a family."
Oh Belo :(((((((
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"We look so pretty," Belo says, pointing at their snowy portrait. Bela's is the biggest, Bem's has sharpest edges, and oddly, Belo's has the largest wings.

This image is just too cute (and an accurate representation of their personalities, in a way). Possibly my favorite passage in this piece ♥

"At this time of night, there's no one to see them," Bela returns, tipping his hat at him in a way that makes his chest clench.

I see your subtle shipping of Bem x Bela.
It looks a lot like your Kame x Anne.
This is not a bad thing, btw ;DDDD

And the end. With him feeling human because they are together and guuuuuuh.
So adorable and warm and xmasy. I love this season for this certain half melancholic but mostly happy mood that it can have and you captured it perfectly here.
Thank youuuuuu Sara, iluuuuuu *clings*

♥♥♥♥
*grabs the 'ilu ♥' tag and runs with it*
i'm considering that that tag is for me and nothing will convince me it isn'tttttttt

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scorch66 December 19 2011, 00:45:12 UTC
*approves of and is flattered by your creepy collecting tendencies :B* ♥♥

Obviously if I fail my exam, you're taking the blame *rolls* What can I say, General, other than my muse has latched onto your Bemu-Nashi icon your will is my command~? :'3 ♥

I feel that Bem's the type who'd want to celebrate every holiday out there in order to find a feeling of belonging. fhjskdk he'd decorate eggs and leave them for Belo to find during easter ;_; ♥

IT WAS EITHER SNOWMEN OR SNOWANGELS BUT SNOWANGELS WON OVER BECAUSE OF THAT METAPHOR fhskjdhjk so happy you enjoyed that bit. (*⌒―⌒*) and I was all :/ over angel!Bem's description as the one with the sharpest edges because I was trying to get across that he's the careful one who does things conscientiously and I wasn't sure that was conveyed properly but I think you got it so ^___^\m/ #rambles #tossesmolebadge

You caught me red-nosed in my subtle shippery Dx
It was entirely inspired by this:


100% canon :')

I love giving little surprise gifties, especially when recipients enjoy them so you're super-duper-mega welcome~ 8D ♥♥♥ ilutooooo ♪ (◎ノ´з`)ノ *chus*

*stores away fancy xmas hearts* ♥
/does nothing to try to convince you otherwise because it's true~

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misao_duo December 19 2011, 02:24:19 UTC

i will let you know that i only creepy collect things that are worth of being in the creepy collection. feel proud :B ♥

Nah, if you fail your exam that's on you but if you want to blame me for other stuff than that's probably cool :B
So, my will is your command now? You are such a valuable soldier (⌒▽⌒)☆☆☆

you know, if in a few months you feel like writing Nem (possibly awkwardly) decorating eggs to leave them for Belo to find...that would be pretty cool :B I AM JUST SAYING.

And indeed the part about the snowangels was one of my favorites.
When i was reading the description about Bem's angel i got that you meant it more in relation to the careful aspect of his personality. If any of the 3 of them were to be sharp around the edges, that would be Bela :")
Bem is just...really mellow ♥

Oh i am so happy to be reminded of the existence of that pic.
I remember being happy when i saw it first but it was small sized so it's nice to get it bigger and after reading this :)

here i will let you know that you can always give me little surprise gifties for i will always enjoy them ♥♥♥ (◎ノ´з`)ノ *chus*
and you know i would even go as far as SENDING you gifties back but you didnt let me so :(

/ヽ(;▽;)ノ

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scorch66 December 19 2011, 04:06:07 UTC
but you do deliver .gif(ties) *__* #junnoing #nosadfacing ♥

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