PoT Fic: Growing Pains (TezRyo, R)

[scoradh]

Growing Pains
Tezuka/Ryoma, R
Konomi's, not mine.

a/n: After a thorough spellcheck and edit, this is still pretty much woeful. Sucks to be me. Advance apologies for fic dumping over the next few days (especially to those not affiliated with PoT). I am doing my best to post outside of rush hour.

Comments

[weirdlyyours]

A;SDLKFJ I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY. This is brilliant, so brilliant and I'm kind of still laughing over the part where Ryoma goes and asks Tezuka about puberty and Tezuka tells him to masturbate. Your Tezuka is so priceless, the way he rushes off to the bathroom and writes about eating wasabi in England and stares at Ryoma's legs.

Also, I love that Inui's juice finally sent someone to the hospital.

This fic just wins on so many levels. ♥♥♥

[scoradh]

Wow, this comment was the nicest thing to find on a rainy Sunday morning! :D

I'm monstrously glad that Tezuka worked for you. I've read him so many times as this emotionless guy, and he works really well as a comic foil that way -- but somehow I couldn't deny him the joys of a real, live, boycrush.

It totally would, though! I cannot believe he gets away with near poisoning his teammates every week. Never mind Fuji -- Inui is the real evil mastermind of the series!

Check out my icon, dude.

[takewing]

OMG.

[scoradh]

heheheh indeed. ♥

[todaythesamesky]

Oh, WIN.

[scoradh]

:D

Gah, this only reminds me that I have GOT to get my shit together and leave you feedback for your stuff! In the meantime, just know that it is made of awesome (in case you didn't already). More explicit love will be forthcoming in the near future -- probably once I'm back in college and avoiding study instead of writing like a mofo. ♥

[karorumetallium]

Damn, you'd done it AGAIN. That was brilliant. I love Ryoma's innocence and defiance. Poor Tezuka xDDDD

[scoradh]

Ha, I think this is a great theme -- puberty hitting both of them like an anvil! Hopefully I did it justice, but I'm not sure. I wrote a kiss to go with it, but I don't think they were ready for it. ♥

[karorumetallium]

Well, I love this kind of fic. And you're right, they weren't ready for that... yet. Let them be older and sexier xDDDD

[athyestean]

I love how Ryoma is so freaking naive, and just adore him asking Tezuka about puberty. Come on... Tezuka!

[scoradh]

[grins] Well, the poor child is only fifteen.

Granted in another country he could very well be married by now, see: Borat, but still ...