Comments | scoradh: PoT Fic: Built This Way [1/4]

scoradh

PoT Fic: Built This Way [1/4]

Dec 12, 2006 19:37

Built This Way [1 / 4; complete]
this part: PG-13
Konomi's, not mine

a/n: I wrote this ages ago -- 'September 16' was the last time I edited it. I'm pretty sure I even had it beta'd by gin_and_ironic, or moshes, or both. So, this is a little ditty about Jack and Diane Ryou and Choutarou, two Japanese porn stars kids doin' the best they can … The usual cliché-fest. ( Read more... )

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scoradh December 12 2006, 19:41:12 UTC

All in good time, my little dumpling.

As in, tomorrow.

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scoradh December 12 2006, 19:45:03 UTC

Dude, I have an OSCE tomorrow. I haven't even found my tights, let alone my lecture notes.

CODING MIGHT WAIT FOR NO MAN, BUT IT HAS TO WAIT FOR ME.

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hungry_worm December 12 2006, 20:01:17 UTC

I really love this. Beautiful writing style and nice characterizations, so sweet at times. ^_^ Thank you for writing and sharing! :) Shishido thinks of the way tennis clubs eats his life. He thinks of the piles of homework on his bedroom floor, which resemble small, unscaled mountains. He thinks of his weekend chores. His Playstation. What Atobe said about how it was high time his team started dating or the rats from Seigaku would nail all the pretty girls.

"Sure," he says. Ohtori's face lights up like Shishido's turned on a switch inside his head. "I'd like that."

scoradh December 12 2006, 20:03:07 UTC

Thank you! The Silver Pair are a bit diabetogenic, come to think of it. ♥

hungry_worm December 12 2006, 20:08:45 UTC

Hehe, you could say that. Not that I mind, not at all. :D

scoradh December 12 2006, 20:10:45 UTC

Me either. ;D

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serenia December 12 2006, 20:33:14 UTC

Oh, that was lovely. It brought back so many memories of music lessons when I was in school! The Ohtori/Shishido seemed almost incidental, but I'm so looking forward to seeing more.

scoradh December 12 2006, 20:35:15 UTC

I think in writing this I was trying to exorcise my own. ;D Thanks, and check back over the next few days for updates. ♥

serenia December 12 2006, 21:02:17 UTC

I assume you are/were a piano player? I used to play violin, and later the clarinet and tenor sax. I never learned piano; I don't think I'd be too good at it!

kessie December 12 2006, 22:17:36 UTC

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!

*flails*

Ohgodmoremoremorepleaseyay!!!!

( ... )

scoradh December 12 2006, 22:35:12 UTC

Hold tight, my love!

Once a data collector, always a data collector ...? :D

kessie December 13 2006, 00:04:49 UTC

Ah, that makes sense. *facepalms* 'Cause I thought for a while that Kaidoh had gone to Hyoutei and my brain was refusing to make the connection. :))

scoradh December 13 2006, 09:13:22 UTC

Kaidoh at Hyoutei is an awesome idea, but sadly one I did not think to include. :(

cedony December 12 2006, 22:34:08 UTC

Arggghh...I was so totally into this fic that it was a complete shock when this part ended!!!

This was wonderful! I loved the interaction between the two, and the little flashes of humor in the story. I really can't wait to read more! ^_^

scoradh December 12 2006, 22:36:51 UTC

lol! Thanks for your comment. ♥ Update tomorrow!