I really liked this, very much! It shows a lot of insight into Tamaki, that it seems to me is sort of unspoken and only hinted at, but there anyway. He's clearly not stupid, even if he likes to act that way.
anyway. one tiny nit pick And a part of him wanted to make the only person that he knew was capable of being completely herself understand that about them. should be "Part of him wanted to make the only person that he knew (either add that or remove was) was capable of being completely herself understand that about them."
in any event, this is fantastic. Thanks for posting!
.... wow. This is a beautiful fic! I love all the insight into Tamaki's motives for creating the host club Tamaki Suoh had created one place that allowed the heir of an extremely tough martial arts family to enjoy cute things, a set of twins to experience a life outside of their tiny world, and the third son of a family to exercise and cultivate talents that would have been otherwise ignored and that could one day win him the status of an heir. I had never really thought of that, but now that you've said it it makes perfect sence! Keep up he wonderful work!
And its funny that you liked that part, because that was completely added in as an afterthought ^_^ But in the end, Tamaki's influence on their lives may not so much be about changing them...as keeping them the same. So, I ended up with a random explanation of his motives. ^_^ We'll see if my speculation is correct...
But, comments are always much appreciated! Thank you again.
Absolutely fantastic! Somehow, after reading this fic, Tamaki's situation is even more sad ... your use of description and imagery makes this fic so poignant, and your insight into Tamaki's character is amazing. Your portrayal of him gave him the depth that is lacking in so many fics - well done! *thumbs up*
Yeah! Someone came back and read part 1! I'm glad you found it enjoyable.
I'm always a little sad when I see Tamaki recieve flat characterizations in other fics because occasionally he is quite serious and there is a strong backbone to his character behind the frivolity. Because in the end, he's simply trying to maintain himself in a world populated by people like his grandmother...
...on a random note I wonder how the rest of the world would percieve him since he is, in effect, the bastard child of his father...perhaps another fic...
But, I digress (as usual ^^U). So, thank you very much for your comments, I very much appreciate it!
I'm always a little sad when I see Tamaki recieve flat characterizations in other fics because occasionally he is quite serious and there is a strong backbone to his character behind the frivolity. Because in the end, he's simply trying to maintain himself in a world populated by people like his grandmother...
EXACTLY. That's how I see him as well! (Although I don't put it as eloquently as you do! XD)
I wonder how the rest of the world would percieve him since he is, in effect, the bastard child of his father...perhaps another fic...
Oooh, if you did write that, I'd so love to read it!!! *___*
I actually have an idea and a rough outline of something involving that concept that takes place post-series...but it will be painful to write (why must angst plot bunnies bite me...?).
I have no idea when I will write that. ~_^
But, as I took copious notes on the next character for this fic last night, I should actually write it soon!
That was really good. The characterization was amazing. I think you really captured Tamaki, getting his serious side yet not overdoing it. Tamaki is Tamaki. I really liked this and am off to read the second part now!
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anyway. one tiny nit pick And a part of him wanted to make the only person that he knew was capable of being completely herself understand that about them. should be "Part of him wanted to make the only person that he knew (either add that or remove was) was capable of being completely herself understand that about them."
in any event, this is fantastic. Thanks for posting!
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Tamaki Suoh had created one place that allowed the heir of an extremely tough martial arts family to enjoy cute things, a set of twins to experience a life outside of their tiny world, and the third son of a family to exercise and cultivate talents that would have been otherwise ignored and that could one day win him the status of an heir. I had never really thought of that, but now that you've said it it makes perfect sence!
Keep up he wonderful work!
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And its funny that you liked that part, because that was completely added in as an afterthought ^_^ But in the end, Tamaki's influence on their lives may not so much be about changing them...as keeping them the same. So, I ended up with a random explanation of his motives. ^_^ We'll see if my speculation is correct...
But, comments are always much appreciated! Thank you again.
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I'm always a little sad when I see Tamaki recieve flat characterizations in other fics because occasionally he is quite serious and there is a strong backbone to his character behind the frivolity. Because in the end, he's simply trying to maintain himself in a world populated by people like his grandmother...
...on a random note I wonder how the rest of the world would percieve him since he is, in effect, the bastard child of his father...perhaps another fic...
But, I digress (as usual ^^U). So, thank you very much for your comments, I very much appreciate it!
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I'm always a little sad when I see Tamaki recieve flat characterizations in other fics because occasionally he is quite serious and there is a strong backbone to his character behind the frivolity. Because in the end, he's simply trying to maintain himself in a world populated by people like his grandmother...
EXACTLY. That's how I see him as well! (Although I don't put it as eloquently as you do! XD)
I wonder how the rest of the world would percieve him since he is, in effect, the bastard child of his father...perhaps another fic...
Oooh, if you did write that, I'd so love to read it!!! *___*
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I have no idea when I will write that. ~_^
But, as I took copious notes on the next character for this fic last night, I should actually write it soon!
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Thank you very much for your comments! <3
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