Fic: Newcomers: Thomas Wright, USMC (SGA, OC, R, gen)

[scherryzade]

Title: Newcomers: Thomas Wright, USMC
Rating: R (for language, because there are Marines...), gen
Character: OC
Disclaimer: The context isn't mine (the main character is), no harm meant.
Summary: This is not his daddy's momma's Marine Corps.
A/N: This is kind of the less-silly version of Paradigm Shift: Served Cold, but it's also the start of a series

Comments

[themolesmother]

Nice! (as Jack would say)

Never had so much training in such a short space of time, even if a lot of it's lectures on "Working with Civilians" (the SGC vets call this "Don't Piss Off McKay") and "ATA Protocol" ("What not to touch in the Pegasus Galaxy") and what the schedule calls "Unanticipated First Contacts" ("The Sex Ritual and You" - He's pretty sure they're kidding. Pretty sure, but not certain.)

Please, please let's have a sex ritual in a future story somewhere. My mind's working overtime :-).

Looking forward to reading the rest.

MM

[scherryzade]

Thanks!

(It was meant to be a throwaway line, but... ;)

[scherryzade]

Thanks! I was a little concerned that the final section wouldn't work - all the voices without names - so I'm glad you like it :)

[saffronhouse]

oh, this is really a lot of fun!

[scherryzade]

Thanks!

[goddess47]

Sheppard sounds like he's trying not to laugh. "You get one to turn it on, one to blow it up when it goes horribly wrong."

Oh, perfect... I love Atlantis through those 'other' characters and you've caught this nicely!

::scurries off to read more::

[scherryzade]

Thanks!

[gelbes_gilatier]

Oh, I like Stargate stories with OCs and I love your direct and understated style. I especially like it that you wrote from the perspective of someone absolutely new to Atlantis because I rarely get to read stories about this. Good work!

[scherryzade]

Thanks!