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Scent and Sensuality: Chapter 5

Jul 03, 2005 19:47

( In which plans are foiled, plans are made, and plans are carried out. )

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balefully July 5 2005, 00:21:41 UTC

Thanks! I was a little worried about writing in such a verbose style at first, but I think it turned out well. :D!

dubaiyan July 4 2005, 04:22:29 UTC

Re: ooo! *analyses Harry* balefully July 5 2005, 00:22:20 UTC

OMG poor troubled Harry. D: Can't wait to see what he'll do at Remus', though! :D!

Appreciate the tightness of jazzypom July 4 2005, 08:12:58 UTC

this one. The words work, and the focus on the two situations (Harry and Sirius, Ginny and her brothers) was fairly well done.

Roll on.

Re: Appreciate the tightness of balefully July 5 2005, 00:28:32 UTC

Thanks! I was getting a little worried about Sirius being irredeemably cruel, so I thought I'd address that. And Harry hadn't been in it since chapter one, really, and his reactions are important. :D!

underlucius July 4 2005, 12:21:08 UTC

SQUEE!!!!!!!!!!

I Missed this being posted!

RECS LIKE CRAZY!

Will go and read it now!

back later!

underlucius July 4 2005, 12:30:23 UTC

Read it now.

Just great! I ADORE Sirius, and it's just how I was guiding it - Dark Secrets but wants to keep tabs on Moony, whilst never letting his true feelings known.

*sobs*

Well done, and thank you so much!!

xxx

balefully July 5 2005, 00:29:52 UTC

:D! YAYEZ! I was ridiculously worried that I was going to mess everything up, so I'm glad it worked for you.