Ficlet: Sympathy for the Devil - Gen - Derek-centric

Oct 15, 2008 18:29

TITLE: Sympathy for the Devil
AUTHOR: indiefic
CHARACTERS: Derek
RATING: Gen
WORD COUNT: 800
WARNINGS: Spoilers for everything that’s aired in the US, including the movies.
DISCLAIMER: Don't own 'em. Don't know who does.
TIMELINE: Set around 2.05
SUMMARY: But John Connor - the John Connor Derek knew in the future - never had the comfort of a ( Read more... )

rating: pg, character - derek, gen, character - john

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indiefic October 16 2008, 00:07:13 UTC
Thanks :)

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missnyah October 15 2008, 23:56:33 UTC
This was really fitting. I, too, get the feeling that there's little love lost between Derek and the General even thoguh Derek seems to play it off the other way sometimes. I liked the differences Derek felt between the idea of dying for the two Connors.
Great.

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indiefic October 16 2008, 00:08:16 UTC
I think that definitely at the time Derek thought there was no love lost and in retrospect he's feeling guilty because he thinks future!John was putting on a show for him and he bought it.

Or at least that's my take ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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alice_bunnie October 16 2008, 00:01:13 UTC
Very nice.

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indiefic October 16 2008, 00:08:31 UTC
Thanks!

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azewewish October 16 2008, 00:05:18 UTC
I really like this. Like you, I always felt that Derek didn't care too much for Adult!John, for all that he respected him, but Nephew!John is a person he'd crawl through glass for, and gladly.

Great vignette!!

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indiefic October 16 2008, 00:09:22 UTC
Indeed. And I love the disconnect there and how much it must weight on Derek's conscience.

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amilyn October 16 2008, 01:18:07 UTC
Yes...what you both said. Yes.

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indiefic October 16 2008, 02:35:20 UTC
Thanks :D

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worlddescending October 16 2008, 02:19:40 UTC
OOh, I love this one too. I love the layers here-- the good and the bad and how Derek struggles with it. How it all comes down to: And it pisses Derek off to no end. Because John is a good kid and he doesn’t deserve to have to become the kind of manipulative bastard who has to deal with that shit.

Good schtuff.

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indiefic October 16 2008, 02:35:49 UTC
I love me some Derek angst, yes I do

:D

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