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lorilozz February 19 2008, 07:22:46 UTC
OMG! You are officially my favourite person right now! That was amazing. The moment we've all been waiting for has arrived and it was perfectly paced and well worth the wait. I loved everything about this chapter especially the first Naley scene and Pete's interruption. Damn that guy is funny. I adored Haley putting Deb in her place. Her fierce protectiveness over Nathan makes my heart melt and I love that he feels safe enough with her to be so vulnerable. Nathan's worries about the Luke/Pete relationship were so heartbreaking. He really hasn't had much experience with real friendships and having much self-worth other than being the BMOC, and this really showed through with his fears about the other two liking each other more than him.

I think possibly my favourite part of this chapter was the two of them openly showing off their relationship to the rest of the school. There's just this overwhelming feeling of them agains the world now and as long as they have each other they can face anything. I have so much more to say, but I've really got to go. Thanks for another awesome update Brynne. You're the best! - Lori

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