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Chapter 47 anonymous February 7 2008, 06:08:44 UTC
I loved this chapter so much. I just wanted to say that I know Nathan screwed up royally, but I just adore the changes he is trying to make for himself. And someone commented how they didn't know how NH were going to be able to reach a place where they can interact, especially since Haley seems so cold to Nathan sometimes, but I too see how they may be able to rebuild their relationship with Haley agreeing to tutor Nathan again. I love it. Really love it.

I adored how you made Nathan afraid to go to the cafe because he was afraid of Karen but once he got past that, he was there "conveniently" when Haley was working. Hee! Oh, and I heart the friendship between Nathan and Pete. Pete is exactly the type of friend Nathan needs right now and it's always enjoyable to read their interactions.

And lastly I really feel for Haley and how she is unhappy right now but you can't help but smile at the fact that even though she is trying to be rid of Nathan Scott, it's not really what she wants and she finds herself drifting towards him despite everything. Their kiss and Nathan's elation after she agreed to tutoring was so cute.

I really can't wait to see what next chapter brings and I hope you update soon!

Mari

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Re: Chapter 47 anonymous September 25 2008, 14:03:57 UTC
I love this story and I love your writing. Just finished reading and I can't wait for the update. Please don't wait to long to update.

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