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The First and Simplest Emotion

Apr 18, 2011 20:57

Title: The First And Simplest Emotion
Author: cherry_road
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Minor, minor gore it almost isn't even there, and minor character death.
Word Count: 9,080
Betas: The lovely emilie_kitten and lady_fro. ♥ Also major props to my artist, red_rahl for basically being my soundboard and for creating such a beautiful piece of art to be inspired from. You ( Read more... )

pairing: arthur/eames, type: fic, character: miles, fandom: inception, character: eames, verse: arthur the android, character: dom cobb, character: arthur, type: art

Comments 8

oberstein April 20 2011, 07:55:57 UTC

I know Red was not so secretly hoping for a Metal Gear Solid/Inception crossover, but I really like how you interpreted her art prompt, and not just because I am not that familiar with Metal Gear Solid. I especially like how you wrote out Arthur as the android who's just trying to be human, but not trying too hard at it. Great work. :)

cherry_road April 20 2011, 19:07:53 UTC

I am unfamiliar with Metal Gear Solid as well, and my brain immediately went to Android!Arthur, which...I'm not quite sure how my brain works? But I'm glad it worked out. Thanks so much! :)

neomeruru April 20 2011, 17:28:02 UTC

I really liked this, especially Eames' change or heart about the "loony bin".

cherry_road April 20 2011, 19:08:22 UTC

Thanks a bunch! :)

cs_whitewolf April 20 2011, 18:55:14 UTC

What a delightful story! I'm so happy that Arthur finally "gets" it in regards to Eames, and that scene at the end, with Arthur willingly initiating contact by putting his hand over Eames' had my heart all a flutter with glee. oh, boys!

Thanks for sharing!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

cherry_road April 20 2011, 19:09:01 UTC

It makes me flail while saying, "Oh, boys!" as well, so I'm glad we're in the same boat, haha. I'm glad you liked it! :D

red_rahl April 21 2011, 06:00:19 UTC

I seriously loved where your brain took my art prompt! I remember reading the opening scene and being so damned intrigued by it! ^__^ I love how you delved into Arthur's thought processes and his confusion and I loved his slow realization as to why he felt more at ease around Eames.

I'm very, very grateful that you chose me and I'm so excited to find out what will happen next and how it'll all play out!! *SQUISHES YOU!!!!*

cherry_road April 21 2011, 22:29:55 UTC

Eeeeeee I'm so glad you like it. *is squished* :D :D