Ficlet: Sister, sister, Padma/Parvati, mild R

[emei]

Hi everybody! I'm very happy to be here, and I think we'll all have fun. : )

Title: Sister, sister
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Comments

[voldything]

omg *is in awe*

This is brillant.

[emei]

Thank you very much!
:D

[emei]

Eee, thank you! <3

[jazzyjello]

Wow.

This is such gorgeous, poetic writing. I love the repitition and the incomplete phrases and the lovely imagery.

Ram-tam-tam of a train, fragrance of spices tickling her nose in hugs, and take care now, take care of each other, each other, each other.
--
In the beginning there were sisters. That is how the story began and this is how it goes. Sister.

So beautiful. ♥

[emei]

Thank you! About the incomplete phrases - I don't see our narrator as sane and sensible all the way thorough anymore, and I tried to convey that through the language. I'm happy you liked it!

[yamapea]

[emei]

ahaha, I've been lurking in a corner of fandom, intimidated by all the awesome writers. (And possibly learning how to use English properly in the meantime.)

And thank you, so much. You are doing terrible things to the size of my ego... :D

See, I'd probably fail spectacularly if I tried to write novel-length fic. I need to be inside the character's head, and only the details that matter should come through there. It usually helps prevent things from getting dull, but it also makes for quite short fics.

Much much love to you for all your wonderful comments! <33

[kethlenda]

This is beautiful, and there's a sadness to it--I definitely get the impression that one of them has died and the other is left behind--that last image of almost but not seeing her again in the mirror just killed me. Guh.

(Guessing: Is this Parvati's voice?)

[emei]

Mm, yes. That's exactly what I intended.
Thank you!