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Twilight Fic: After The Same Rainbow's End

Mar 12, 2009 21:19

Title: After The Same Rainbow's End
Summary: Each time he held her in his arms it never failed to rekindle the desire, the way he could almost feel the graceful way their bodies would move together-quick, quick, slow-in time to the rhythm of the music. Edward/Bella, post BD.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1318
Author's Note: Written for part_of_him's Love Bites ( Read more... )

edward/bella, twilight, fluff

Comments 23

unicornhime March 13 2009, 03:57:04 UTC

Guh, that was fabulous. You have such a beautiful way with words. And it was just so sweet and adorable and I love it. <3

scarlett71177 March 13 2009, 04:03:05 UTC

Oh gosh. Thank you so much, dear. I was a bit worried about this one.

I'm so very glad you liked it. Thanks for the lovely words.

thalia_csiny March 13 2009, 08:31:01 UTC

Gorgeous as usual. The imagery and words blend well together, creating such a beautiful picture. So romantic!! LOVE IT!! :D

scarlett71177 March 13 2009, 20:00:48 UTC

Thank you so much, I appreciate the kind words. Glad you liked it!

train_lindz March 13 2009, 13:37:28 UTC

I always love your fluff - it's just so fluffy!

Well done! The contrast of the evaluation of Bella is wonderful - Prom!Bella vs. Wedding!Bella vs. Vampire!Bella - all the same person with the different levels of confidence.

Lovely :) ♥

scarlett71177 March 13 2009, 20:02:02 UTC

lol, Thanks.

Thanks for the comment re: the evaluation of Bella. I found that contrast interesting.

*hugs* Thanks again, hon.

javidan March 13 2009, 19:35:53 UTC

Luscious!
I love the words you've chosen:
his heart tap dancing

and the dialogue...

and the visual for where their hands are...and what they're touching...
*sigh*

Yum.

scarlett71177 March 13 2009, 20:04:00 UTC

Thanks so much!

I felt really self-conscious about this piece, so your review made my day. I was really worried I was getting too mechanical or something in regard to the body movement/dance steps, so it's nice to know it wasn't too bad.

Thanks for reading. <3

heart_to_words March 13 2009, 21:46:42 UTC

beautiful. simply, wonderfully beautiful. loved the imagery, the comparisons, the language...

phenomenal fluff. and it's exactly my favorite kind. ^_^

scarlett71177 March 13 2009, 22:19:02 UTC

Thank you so very much! I'm glad you liked the fic. ^_^