it been to long - this is a stroy i have written what do you think of it
† God is Here †
Drip, Drip
Water hits the forehead of a man tied to a chair, the man has long brown hair, it is pulled back, fair skinned all bruised and bloody, he was wearing an Australian army uniform with a name tag all it said was “viper”. He was surrounded by Vietnamese all screaming at his in there native tongue, then one man stepped forward lent over so he was about 5 cm for viper’s face, he spoke in clear English
“Hello captain I have been waiting for this chance”
“This chance is not going to last!!!” replied viper just as he spat in the eyes of the Vietnamese man
12 years early
A man ran through a corridor, slide around a corner and started running again, he got to a door that said room 01 mission briefing,
He straitens him self up, and walks in a voice calls out
“How nice of you to join us Viper”
The young man answered “sorry I am late commander”
“It’s ok just be hear on time” replied the commander
Viper sat down in a chair that had been saved for him by his best friend
Privet Joseph Paterson code name “graphic” he is a strategic officer,
Viper sat in his chair a looked to the front of the room and through a crowd of heads he only saw hers Lieutenant Betty Joule code name “SKYHAMMER” she had blonde hair down to her shoulder but it was tied up into a ponytail, she was about 5’11”
All of a sudden she turns around as sees him looking at her there eyes touch for a second as he turns away so she doesn’t know he was looking at her, in the briefing all he can think about her, until the Commander asked him a question about the mission
Drip, Drip
Water hits the forehead of a man tied to a chair, the man has long brown hair, it is pulled back, fair skinned all bruised and bloody, he was wearing an Australian army uniform with a name tag all it said was “viper”. He was surrounded by Vietnamese all screaming at his in there native tongue, then one man stepped forward lent over so he was about 5 cm for viper’s face, he spoke in clear English
“Hello captain I have been waiting for this chance”
“This chance is not going to last!!!” replied viper just as he spat in the eyes of the Vietnamese man
12 years early
A man ran through a corridor, slide around a corner and started running again, he got to a door that said room 01 mission briefing,
He straitens him self up, and walks in a voice calls out
“How nice of you to join us Viper”
The young man answered “sorry I am late commander”
“It’s ok just be hear on time” replied the commander
Viper sat down in a chair that had been saved for him by his best friend
Privet Joseph Paterson code name “graphic” he is a strategic officer,
Viper sat in his chair a looked to the front of the room and through a crowd of heads he only saw hers Lieutenant Betty Joule code name “SKYHAMMER” she had blonde hair down to her shoulder but it was tied up into a ponytail, she was about 5’11”
All of a sudden she turns around as sees him looking at her there eyes touch for a second as he turns away so she doesn’t know he was looking at her, in the briefing all he can think about her, until the Commander asked him a question about the mission