Fic: The Ties That Bind (3/4)

[sc_angelfic]

Title: The Ties That Bind (3/4)
Author: sc_angel72
Pairing/Characters: Ronon Dex/Jennifer Keller
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Everything since Quarantine
Disclaimers: Not mine. I just like to play in the sandbox.
A/N: Okay, so this isn't going to be the last chapter after all. Ronon and Jennifer hijacked the story and decided there were a few more issues to be

Comments

[funkyinfishnet]

He'd leave the noble bullshit to Sheppard from now on.

LOL a thought straight from Ronon's brain, you channel him so well. This chapter is magnificent, it made me kinda breathless cos I wanted to see what was gonna happen next. I love them talking out their problems, Ronon knowing that she's changing him already, and the way you portray Melena. This is great work and I can't wait for the conclusion :- )

[lizbet0]

Being painfully aroused and having a coherent conversation at the same time -- without yelling -- wasn't something he was very good at.

*snicker* Poor Ronon!

He could already feel the gods or the cosmos or whatever laughing at him, knowing this woman was going to teach him some patience whether he liked it or not.

LOL!

He was starting to figure out that just shutting up and letting her stew got him the answers he wanted.

*heehee*

That was a really, really stupid answer.

Yep, and you're going to be making it up to her for a while, if you're smart, big guy!

(Er, minor typo: "He was fairly certain that hat" is missing the t in the last "that.")

This was really neat! I hope you're intending to continue it, because I'd love to read what happens next!

[momm2five]

"So, Doc, what's it going to be?"

tbc

Oh MAN!! I hope the next part is on the way!!
I love this fic. I was so happy to see this chapter. I think I've been reading it on FF.net, though, right??
You've got Ronon down perfectly, and I love it.

[whitemunin]

Ack! You can't just leave it here!!

So many good things about this chapter. I'll revisit later with something more extensive and coherent. Right now I have a child hanging on me demanding food, so off I go. But I wanted to say woohoo! This was wonderful!

More! More!

[sweetwaterspice]

This chapter was pure perfection! The raw intensity; the bridge between total surrender and apprehension from both sides...good god! I was sitting on the edge of my seat! You have truly created a fic worth reading over and over again. There were just too many good parts for me to pick a favorite. I loved it all! Keep up the good work.