MLK Monday Morsel

Jan 19, 2009 16:09

Writing weekend was great - 12,000 words and almost finished the book.  Veeeeeery rough, but now the fun starts, right?

Here's a Monday Morsel (a little thought/exercise on writing) - haven't done one in a while.  This comes from The Creative Process by Burke and Tinsley.

Choose a passage in your writing that contains a number of -ly adverbs.  Think of each one as an unfinished simile...Experiment with different ways of completing the simile, and see if one of them won't serve in place of the adverb.  For example:

He scanned the room nervously...nervous as a mouse in captivity...He scanned the room like a nervous mouse.

Okay, it's pretty rudimentary - but sometimes we need to remember those basics.  Have fun!

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