Metamorphosis

Oct 30, 2016 04:33

Title: Metamorphosis
Creator: TheFoxinator
Rating: K
Setting: Post-season ten
Prompt: Metamorphosis
Word Count: 525
Author's Note: Despite some similarities, this is not related to any of my previous fics. Also, I'm sorry.

Metamorphosis )

creator: foxstarreh, setting: b10, medium: fic

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feliciacraft October 30 2016, 15:51:00 UTC
Lol at the ending! I did not see that coming!

Also:
“You wanna know a thing I missed about our dimension?”

“Was it hot doughnuts?” Buffy asks. This back-and-fourth is almost daily, and the answer is always whatever it is Dawn is using or looking at or doing at the moment. Dryer sheets and bobby pins and liquid soap and crab cakes with peanut butter.

“It was hot doughnuts!” Dawn agrees.

That was *so* Dawn! And such a Summers sisterly exchange. :)

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thenewbuzwuzz October 30 2016, 19:18:05 UTC
Oh my. :D The crowd of tourists was hilarious! And the sulking. (I mean, who wouldn't sulk, though.)

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rebcake November 1 2016, 02:30:48 UTC
Will his trials never end? Heh. Nope.

I like that nobody's really worried, just keeping an eye (in some cases glaring) on things.

Local edit: Pier 39, rather than K-Dock. It could be Pier Anynumber, but the most tourists would be at 39 or 41. Therefore, those would be the most humiliating and the closest to doughnuts!

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foxstarreh November 1 2016, 02:41:13 UTC
They're at Pier 39. (Hence the doughnuts and trampoline and proximity to the aquarium.) But Xander doesn't leave Pier 39, he just leaves the sea lion section, and I think their dock is K-Dock. If you can correct that, though, I will certainly be grateful.

Yeah, Spike... always something. The Scoobies must be used to it by now.

Thanks for the feedback!

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shapinglight November 16 2016, 16:35:17 UTC
The narwhal thing never gets old, have to say, and this is a great addition to the genre.

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double_dutchess December 28 2016, 00:20:21 UTC
A big hurray for Spike as a narwhal! And a glaring narwhal is even better :-)

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