Fic: The Right Words (Part 2 of 2)

Oct 29, 2016 16:22

Setting: Undetermined post-series; established (Buffy/Spike) relationship.
Rated: R for suggestive language and oblique sexual references.
Prompt: Revelations.
Author's Note: It took me 2 hours to write this piece by long-hand on Wednesday, and 3 days to FAIL to get it under the 1K word limit. So...in my despair I've broken it into two parts, each ( Read more... )

setting: post-series, creator: feliciacraft, medium: fic

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slaymesoftly October 29 2016, 23:52:05 UTC
Ah - sad and then sweet and wonderful. :)

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feliciacraft October 30 2016, 00:30:55 UTC
*Sqee* Thank you! :)

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feliciacraft October 30 2016, 01:38:17 UTC
Awww, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :)

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rbfvid October 30 2016, 15:08:24 UTC
Aww =) Usually fics where Buffy says these words to Spike seem a bit OOC for me, but you really managed to pull it off. Its so Buffy!

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feliciacraft October 30 2016, 17:00:18 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the character voice rang true to you! :)

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brutti_ma_buoni October 30 2016, 17:55:01 UTC
Ooh. Second person fics are so hard to carry off, but this is dense and poetic, rather than actiony, and it works for me :-)

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feliciacraft October 30 2016, 19:37:09 UTC
Thank you; so glad to hear! The "dense" part I come by naturally, but the "poetic" part I do work at it! :P

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thenewbuzwuzz October 30 2016, 19:12:25 UTC
:)))

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feliciacraft October 30 2016, 19:37:44 UTC
;)

(Thanks for reading and commenting!)

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