Grading fun
Ok.
So.
Here we go again. Here's my fav from this round. I'm copying the grammar errors on purpose....
My comments in red
Enjoy:
I believe if Matt Heid was continue to do good in school, he will have a good education (really? I thought that was always the purpose of education?). Also, he might would be able for a good job in the long run. His appearance may need to change as far as his teeth and the way he present hisself (how about how you present yourself?). The residence that he living in is terrible but if he was willing to try and find a job to help out his mother they just might have a little better living (well, that's why I work....). Rather than him downing his mother all the time. Matt Heid seem like he has a good head on his shoulder. If he make several changes in his way of living things will work out. Matt social life might turn out to be good, just because he has friends now, even though he is ashame of the way he live (and you should be ashamed of the way you write....).
Matt Heid will make it in the long run as long as he continue to do good in school and get involve in different things as far as the community. His look would turn out good, once he build up his grammer (grammar effects looks? not to mention she misspelled grammar which was hard to write.... and wow... pot, meet kettle!) and change his appearance just alittle. As long as Matt keep having a positive mind set, he will make it in life.
Again, I point out that this is a 300 level class! And this is a native English speaker. It was HARD to keep the grammar and spelling errors. My brain twitched typing them on purpose....
So.
Here we go again. Here's my fav from this round. I'm copying the grammar errors on purpose....
My comments in red
Enjoy:
I believe if Matt Heid was continue to do good in school, he will have a good education (really? I thought that was always the purpose of education?). Also, he might would be able for a good job in the long run. His appearance may need to change as far as his teeth and the way he present hisself (how about how you present yourself?). The residence that he living in is terrible but if he was willing to try and find a job to help out his mother they just might have a little better living (well, that's why I work....). Rather than him downing his mother all the time. Matt Heid seem like he has a good head on his shoulder. If he make several changes in his way of living things will work out. Matt social life might turn out to be good, just because he has friends now, even though he is ashame of the way he live (and you should be ashamed of the way you write....).
Matt Heid will make it in the long run as long as he continue to do good in school and get involve in different things as far as the community. His look would turn out good, once he build up his grammer (grammar effects looks? not to mention she misspelled grammar which was hard to write.... and wow... pot, meet kettle!) and change his appearance just alittle. As long as Matt keep having a positive mind set, he will make it in life.
Again, I point out that this is a 300 level class! And this is a native English speaker. It was HARD to keep the grammar and spelling errors. My brain twitched typing them on purpose....