fic: quick the breeze that knocks us down

[saywheeeee]

title: quick the breeze that knocks us down
author: saywheeeee
pairing: eleven/amy
genre: romance/fluff
rating: very light adult. nothing explicit.
word count: 2,329
summary: The Doctor takes Amy to have her nails painted.

Comments

[heintz57]

Oh this is wonderful I love the way you blended Starship UK and New Earth together nicely done what a great connection. Of course orange is always a great color for nail polish.

[saywheeeee]

Thanks! I agree, orange is sexy! And much better than that weird lavender stuff that Amy has on in "The Time of Angels" / "Flesh and Stone." It's really not very flattering on her. :P

[heintz57]

I have been known to wear unusual colors on my nails but I have never choosen lavender (dark purple yes)I don't think it would be flattering on anyone (except my 11 year old)

[kimbo_smarties]

Look at you! You've been on fire lately! And they're all so, so good! I'm loving it! (How many sentences can I end with exclimation marks?!)

This one is probably one of my favorites of yours, though. I love how you followed up to Starship UK and Liz, I love the Doctor going back in time to make an appointment, I love the fluff, and I LOVE Amy's little spark of an idea. There NEEDS to be a sequel to that PRONTO.

Basically, I'm just in love with your writing. :)

[saywheeeee]

Aww! Thanks! There will be some sort of sequel to this, at some point. I can't just abandon the body clock idea because it's been BOTHERING ME FOR SO LONG. So yeah, as soon as the inspiration hits I'll try to crank out a follow-up. Thanks for the review!

[tasty_kate]

lajglaejgaldkjgaljiuenvafl OMG YES.

Firstly, I read your fanfic survey you did a couple days ago about how writing something a bit more on the naughty side would be a challenge and might I say with this small taste-- QUITE GOOD! QUITE GOOD INDEED! You manage to keep them Amy and Eleven and make it intimate and fluffy and a little bit hot. :D I also loved where the Doctor told Amy that she is the most magnificent creature he has ever seen. SO. PRECIOUS.

She feels like if she doesn’t grab hold of him, he might drift away.
I just had to repost that line 'cause it stuck with me. Guh. Your words. The emotions they give me.

Time Travel FTW!! Like the Doctor said before: Only to be used in extremely important circumstances and cheap gags.

Oooh, Amy slowing her body clock down? HMMMMM Will you be expanding on this?

[saywheeeee]

Firstly, I read your fanfic survey you did a couple days ago about how writing something a bit more on the naughty side would be a challenge and might I say with this small taste-- QUITE GOOD! QUITE GOOD INDEED! You manage to keep them Amy and Eleven and make it intimate and fluffy and a little bit hot. :D

Oh thank you! I'm so glad it...you know, worked! It was definitely a challenge. And frankly, what with the amount of self-conscious blushing that was going on during the writing process and the fervent, paranoid glances at my closed door and blinded windows every two minutes, it's probably safe to say that I will not be writing anything more naughty than that, at least for the time being!

Oooh, Amy slowing her body clock down? HMMMMM Will you be expanding on this?

Yes.

[seren_ccd]

Oh. Oh, oh You combined fun, sexy, and thoughtful in such a gorgeous way. They are so gonna have a long old reign. :D

[saywheeeee]

They SO are. Thanks for the review! :)

[master_of_drums]

aww I loved this, the way you wrote amy and the doctor is brilliant. I never thought of putting starship UK and new earth, that is a great idea maybe moffat should borrow that one :)

[saywheeeee]

Thank you! Yeah, I've always been curious about New Earth -- I mean the very first New Earth, not the New-to-the-power-of-15 Earth that 10 and Rose visit. That world's already been up and running for a long time, but I've always wondered what it would be like to see the first planet and the humans' first attempt at colonizing it. I'd love to see the Moff explore that, too!