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First Word - [Oneshot]

Mar 11, 2012 23:55

Title: First Word
Length: Oneshot (approx 1,800 words)
Author: sayhell
Rating: G
Pairings: Chibi!Kyuwook
Genre: Fluff
Summary: Ryeowook’s first word.(For yukwol)
( After reassuring his mother that he would behave for the umpteenth time and bidding her goodbye, four year old Kyuhyun followed Mrs. Kim into the house. )

pairing: kyuhyun / ryeowook, type: oneshot

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hehehe08 March 11 2012, 16:06:44 UTC

THIS WAS AMAZIIIIINNNNGG!!! Oh, I ... I have no words for this, you...Well, actually no, I do, and Kendii beat me to it: it's genius, pure genius!

Ryeowook's banana jumpsuit, and his toy giraffe, and heechul being a queen, and Kyuhyun being Ryeowook's first word, and...

I could go on and on and on.

This was absolutely delicious.

LOVED IT!

kendii_1007 March 11 2012, 16:12:20 UTC

muhuhuhuhuHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA 8D

BUT THE JUMPSUIT ;_; AND RYEOWOOK AND HEECHUL BEING SIBLINGS. GENUIS. JUST GENIUS. ;_;

hehehe08 March 11 2012, 16:14:33 UTC

I know, and him shoving the giraffe in Heechul's face to introduce it, and chirping Kyu's name, and.... Ahhhhhh! XD

kendii_1007 March 11 2012, 16:16:43 UTC

OR NOSE! LOLMAOLOL

THAT, MY FRIEND, IS DESTINY.

sayhell March 12 2012, 11:08:29 UTC

Kendii was just being kind~ A voice just keeps telling me that this could have been executed better, but I'm ignoring it OTL

The Ryeowook in here is a blend of elements inspired from real life. Heechul is nearly the exact replica of how he is in real life too.

I'm glad that you've enjoyed this. Thanks for reading :))

kendii_1007 March 12 2012, 11:14:40 UTC

I WILL KICK YOU. I WILL DO IT WHEN I SEE YOU AGAIN. HOW COULD YOU THINK I WAS ONLY BEING KIND. I AM VERY CRITICAL IN EVERYTHING AND ALL I HAVE ARE PRAISES. ;_;

sayhell March 12 2012, 11:28:24 UTC

But you are always kind when it comes to me XD

kendii_1007 March 12 2012, 11:41:28 UTC

ME? KIND TO YOU? D8<

hehehe08 March 12 2012, 12:02:44 UTC

Okay, so I'm butting back in.

I know, Kendii can be very nice, but I also know that this time, she meant it. And I also meant it. How could we not?

Your writing is really unique: your style is clear and smooth, and incredibly addictive... and I wish I was as eloquent as you in expressing the beauty of it all...

Yes, I enjoyed it, and I always enjoy your work. All of us here always enjoy your work.

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