Fic: Brave

Mar 02, 2012 16:39

Title: Brave
Author: saucydiva
Word count: 3.5K
Rating: R for adult situations, swearing and sex
Disclaimer: Clearly I don’t own it or I would put in ramps for all the seniors.
Timeline: Government Shutdown

Summary: As prompted by shornt:
what if i prompted you leslie/ben/ann threesome

what if

(ok no what ifs, i am prompting it. because.)

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parks and rec, fic: one shot, fan fic

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sullen_aquarian March 2 2012, 23:09:28 UTC
Oh, this makes me so sad--no one is getting what they want. Except maybe Chris, and I'm not counting him. I'm not a Leslie/Ann shipper, but this late Season 2 altverse makes sense.

I was actually wondering if Ben might be bi in your story--him going to the Bulge by himself, combined with his frustration about Ann dating Chris, and Chris always looking for Ben on the bench. Is there a Ben/Chris back story?

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saucydiva March 4 2012, 01:38:02 UTC
Would it make you feel better if I told you Chris is only happy because he's been dating Ann for ten minutes, and he's in for a world of frustration soon? Dating someone who wants to be dating someone else is a difficult thing. And Ann's not exactly going to be an awesome girlfriend.

Glad to see that the hints worked out. I didn't want it to be a complete surprise that Ben was interested in Chris, especially given that he's also into Leslie. As for the bench, it's not that they make out there every night, but more along the lines of going to the water fountain on the other side of the school because it's right by your crush's locker.

Thanks for reading! I was a lot little worried how people would react to this.

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sullen_aquarian March 4 2012, 03:28:35 UTC
It does make me happy, thanks!

Do you plan on continuing the story? I for one would love if you did but can understand if you chose not to.

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saucydiva March 4 2012, 04:08:25 UTC
I'm debating. I have a lot of headcanon for this story: what happened before and what happens next. I had a lot of Ann/Leslie backstory that I couldn't really fit in to the twelve hour timeframe, where and when Ann's crush developed, that kind of thing. And headcanon for Ben that I couldn't put in the story because that reveal at the end wouldn't work. I have a lot of headcanon for how the next few months go; as I said, Ann's not great at dating. Some secrets, but not all the secrets, get revealed. There's a government joke I want to put in there. But the ending's still a little blurry in my mind. So.... maybe.

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shornt March 2 2012, 23:24:23 UTC
ooo everyone has feelings about everyone that is how i like it

ALL THE FEELINGS

yay

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saucydiva March 4 2012, 01:43:41 UTC
Excellent! I'm super pleased you enjoyed it, since you prompted it way back in January and I couldn't quite let the idea go. I thought it was such an intriguing idea, and once I figured out the timeline I knew I had to do it. Because I didn't want to write some sort of Ann-as-sex-toy L/B relationshippy thing; it just wasn't something I wanted to do. But I really liked the idea of exploring sex on precarious relationships, so this totally worked for me.

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stillscape March 2 2012, 23:33:57 UTC
"Who hasn't had gay thoughts? Who?"

As you know, I love when Ann gets assertive, and when Ben is confused (poor Ben, he's so very confused). So, yay! And Ben with the beers, trying to leave his own motel room. Poor confused Ben.

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sullen_aquarian March 2 2012, 23:36:00 UTC
Oh man, the gay thoughts comment! I was waiting for someone in the story to mention that Ben shouldn't have to leave his own room : ).

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saucydiva March 4 2012, 01:48:30 UTC
I know slash isn't really your bag, so I'm glad it still worked for you. That Ben/beers part is the reason I couldn't post it anonymously, because I felt like people would be able to tell that one was me. And I'm glad someone quoted Ben; it had to be done.

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princess_george March 2 2012, 23:40:31 UTC
Wow, this is like the horniest geometry puzzle ever! Very interesting!

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americnxidiot March 2 2012, 23:55:38 UTC
lol I enjoy this comment and I am going to second it.

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saucydiva March 4 2012, 01:59:39 UTC
Thanks for reading! Princess_George cracks me up. I remember once writing about not sleeping/drinking too much, and she wrote on my tumblr that she knew I was hurting, but she approved, generally. I laughed. And then I took an aspirin.

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princess_george March 4 2012, 02:49:26 UTC
Hahahaha. Glad to hear you took the aspirin, at least. My approval is worth what you are all paying for it, of course.

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k8_26_2 March 2 2012, 23:42:56 UTC
First of all, I thought you might like to know that the first time I tried commenting on this fic my computer crashed and froze and I had to force shut it down. So, congrats on that. ; )

Second, I just love the wistful, darker tone of this. I thought it might evolve into another threesome with Leslie/Ben/Chris, or end with a weird, sad foursome. It's not something I can EVER see playing out on a show as happy as Parks (and I really don't think I would like to see it), but you wrote it so well. In a darker Pawnee timeline this scenario would make perfect sense.

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saucydiva March 4 2012, 02:03:24 UTC
I'm sorry for killing your computer. But I'm glad you liked the story, since it was so much darker than I usually go. I love the happiness of the show, and I tend to write that. But this one time, I went dark.

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