[Heroes][Mohinder, Sylar gen] Hunt

[saucy_kate]

Okay I feel I should explain about this fic before I post it. I'm not going to pimp it to any comms or anything because honestly I don't know wtf it is. I'm only posting it because I kind of like it, despite its general mindfuckness. I might post it to comms later if anyone actually reads it and enjoys it, but for now I'm worried that it's

Comments

[fivil]

I liked it a lot, though I felt like fucking hitting Momo with a SLEDGEHAMMER for not figuring out Zane=Sylar. Nobody with a doctorate should be that dumb omg!! But I think it made sense in the fic.

LOVED the end, even though Claire's line seemed a bit awkward. I also like the hopefulness of it all. *wipes a tear*

[kaeda]

oh god I know BUT HIS STUPIDITY IS CANON. THAT'S HOW I'M JUSTIFYING IT. Plus he was blinded by Sylar's play of vulnerability. Even the smartest people bookwise can be blinded by their own emotions, and Mohinder seems to be very passionate and emotional, so I feel like it's plausible.

You're right about Claire's line being awkward, I just reread it. :X I'll go back and fix that. XD I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THIS.

DO YOU THINK I SHOULD PIMP THIS OUT? IS IT WORTH IT?

[kaeda]

Thank you!

I don't know where else to pimp it besides heroes_fic, but if I come across another place maybe I will :)

Thanks for commenting!

[meli_64]

Really good and dark. Great job.

[kaeda]

Thanks :) this is really different than anything else I've written before, so I'm glad people enjoyed it!

[canadian_turtle]

Wow, wow, wow. Best Sylar fic I have read out there, it's absolutely brilliant. I know people have said before me Mohinder sounds a bit dumb, but I think he's only naive and Sylar's just good at what he does. I think all characters you wrote were perfectly canon, the story brilliant (I only hope the show will ever go along these lines, seriously, even if half the cast will die it's a sacrifice made for a brilliant story line). I just really loved it! Thanks so much for posting this fic.

One tip: PIMP!!!!!!

[kaeda]

Sylar is one of my favorite characters and I always tend to like the bad guys, so I suppose it was a matter of time before I ended up writing a fic about him XD;

I already pimped it out to heroes_fic which is where I assume you all came over from, and I'm not quite sure where else to post, but if I find another place I'll surely do so :3

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you like this :D

[erode]

I really, really liked this. The fact that you killed pretty much everyone was very brave, and you made it work perfectly. Very, very nice.

[kaeda]

Oooh, I'm glad! Killing everyone off was really hard. I wanted everyone to live but it just wouldn't have been realistic. :(

I'm really glad you liked this :D Thanks for commenting!