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satorux3

[One Shot] Jealousy

Nov 07, 2009 12:32

Title: Jealousy
Paring: Ryoda
Rating: PG-13?
Genre: drama, Romance
Disclaimer: None of them is mine.
Summary: Ryo is envious and too stubborn to realize that he can lose his love for his life.
A/N: It's un-beta-ed so there will mistakes in it cause english isn't my native language.
( His smile was gone when he looked to the coach... )

ryoda:one shot

Comments 10

museelo November 7 2009, 14:55:34 UTC

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Yeah you should write a sad end just to see xD

It was really cool, I like when Ryo is jealous <3
Ryoda is so much love <33

Thank you =3

satorux3 November 7 2009, 18:32:48 UTC

Ok. I will try it in the next fic! xD

I think so too :D <3

Your welcome and thanks for reading x3

flipangel_88 November 7 2009, 15:26:01 UTC

very cute XD

a jealous Ryo is so stubborn, it was sad but sweet at the same time =]

satorux3 November 7 2009, 18:33:18 UTC

Thank you xD

Glad that you like it x3
Thank you for reading and commenting :D

grashiya01 November 7 2009, 23:08:02 UTC

i love jealous ryo~~ :))
but "trust" is essential in a relationship..

thanks for sharing the love..

satorux3 November 8 2009, 10:44:32 UTC

I love too :D
Yes you are right

chika1611 November 8 2009, 01:57:35 UTC

Awww.... Ryo was jealous.... XDD

But in the end, it's a happy ending right?

No, it's okay. I love this ending. XDD

Keep writing ne?

satorux3 November 8 2009, 10:45:34 UTC

Yes xD

Yes again xD...

Glad that you like it <3

I will x3

Thank you for reading <3

kamenajin November 8 2009, 05:52:05 UTC

jealous Ryo is always love^^
so cute^^
thanks for this~

satorux3 November 8 2009, 10:46:13 UTC

yes :D
Your welcome