[fic] Cracks in the Sidewalk, part iii

[swallowedhalo]

Title: Cracks in the Sidewalk
Pairing: SasuNaru
Genre: AU, Multichap, Angst
Rating: Eventual R or NC-17
Summary: Naruto is a young high school student with a passion for music. From Bob Dylan to Sex Pistols to Elliott Smith, he buries himself deeper and deeper his records with every passing day. Head in the clouds, he dreams of forming a

Comments

[talking_pies]

Still amazing, I'm loving the plot <3 I like that you update quickly too, and all the awesome music you include in the plot *_* I'll be looking for an Elliot Smith album when I get the money.

Just throwing in a bit oc concrit now, I'm not really sure the first paragraph fits in with the flow of the chapter. I have no idea how to rectify that though :/

His honestly last night surprised him,

Should be honesty. :)

Keep it up! <3<3<3

[swallowedhalo]

Thank you! I edited the line, but I'm also unsure as to edit the first paragraph >_>''''

[lazzchan]

And that was just written so nicely... the plot is very smooth and each scene moves into the other. I really like this and I looking foward to the next part. ^_^

[swallowedhalo]

*_* Lazzchan complimented me :O I'm so honored.

[lazzchan]

*laughs*

I do compliment well written stories, I promise you. I find many many stories written a great deal better than my gaping plothole ones. XD

[lazzchan]

and you totally have me listening to every Elliott Smith song out there... XD

[gwichanaayo]

Leaping for joy >w<
I bet you dun have any idea how happy I am to see this.... I need to put my life and my grades (which, from where I come from, are exactly the same things --;;) on the line just to turn on the computer... I really wanted to see if there was the next part... imagine how @*#($& it would be for me if you hadn't updated >.< luckly you did.. *happy happy happy happy.* Sankyuu >.< *goes off to be another person's problem.*

[swallowedhalo]

O_O!!!!! There are fans of this story?! OMG! You make me happy! *imprisons you*

[shakstergrrl]

WoooHooo... wait a great treat to wake up to... each chapter is another hit... but it won't sate my addiction... what a wonderful plot, especially in such a popular fandom using such a popular pairing...it breathes new life into it...and I cannot wait until their connection to each other deepens and gets more intimate. Great imagery...great plot...and Sasuke as a boy with a lot of annoymous sex partners under his belt is damn sexy in an angst EMO sort of way...poor lost soul... great stuff

[swallowedhalo]

Thank you so much for reading! And randomly drunk hookups can make someone depressed, it's true T_T (personal experience). ACK! BAD MEMORIES! But luckily, I've always had someone to save me from overbearing men! YAY for friends!

[vector_nyu]

Your warning cracks me up, and anything with coke goes down way to easy--rum and coke is my poison of choice.

This is a really brilliant fic, I'm sure I've said that before. Thank you for updating so quickly!

How did that song loose to 'my heart will go on'?!
stupid people...

[lazzchan]

*snickers*

I thought of you during the drinking scene, actually. XD Don't know why, but I did. *evil grin*

[vector_nyu]

is because i'm a drunken slut ^_^;;
just feel lucky that you haven't seen me reallydrunk.

[swallowedhalo]

Haha yeah I was sad too, especially since Elliott wore such a snazzy white suit at his performance at the Oscars. I also don't ever recall hearing Miss Misery on the radio, which is disappointing, because it could have been as successfull as any pop song at the time. Then again, his mentioning of Johnny Walker Red and other depressing things might have made the radios think otherwise (though if rappers can mention 1000 dollars bottles of champaign, then why can't Elliott Smith mention Scotch?)

Rum and Coke is good too, though, I always tend to drink more of it because it goes down so easily. Vodka doesn't go down very easily for me at all no matter what it's mixed with, though I can get pretty drunk off of it too.

Thanks so much for reading!