Surface Flaws: Chapter IX

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Title: Surface Flaws
Author: xinexpressiblex
Rating: 14A for swearing and violence.
Warnings: Shounen ai, spoilers for anyone not keeping up with the manga, & AUish. Alternate timeline.
Disclaimer: Yeah, I don’t own.
Thank you: goheh_remix & amain
Summary: The invisibility started with one silly wish upon a star. Good thing Sasuke's doormat personality, Sai's attempts at

Comments

[kittyyuri]

*Can't believe you don't have a swarm of comments by now, or maybe her computer just isn't showing them? O.o* Yay for Canadian spelling! XD *Canadian too*

That chapter...wow...just...wow, I'm speechless really o.o *wishes she could leave a more coherant, in-depth review, but her brain simply cannot handle that right now as it's still to busy processing the entire chapter*

Your characterization is astounding, really, and the last line? Omg love <3 I impatiently await your next update!! ♥ ♥ ♥

[xinexpressiblex]

Aw, thnx ^^ w00t!!! Canada is luff <3 Thank you so much for the review!!! And I'm glad you liked the last line so much! It made me happeh :P Anyways, thank you so much~!!
<3 TJ

[goheh_remix]

You know you make me nervous with your Canadian spellings :P

[xinexpressiblex]

;_; NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *whimpers pathetically* But my patriotism!!!
<3 TJ

(eheh ^^))

[shiruartist]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*TACKLES YOU*
WOW~

AWESOMENESS!

I absolutely love this story~ It has such an amazing plot and it's really developing amazingly. ^_^
JUst. AwesomE.
Can't wait to see what you have you planned for next the chapter!

[xinexpressiblex]

OMFG!!!! *FLAILS HAPPILY*

Why thank you!!! *big giant grin* Glad that you liked and thank you so much for the review!!! *GLOMPS!*
<3 TJ

[shiruartist]

I'm especially interested in the entire chakra leakage etc. debacle.
What is the jutsu being used?
How exactly is it supposed to work?
Why is Naruto invisible sometimes?
Why is his chakra being pulled towards their destination?

Oh- And the the entirely confusing Sasuke-Sakura issue. ^^
It almost sounds as if Sasuke was trying to say to naruto back when Sakura initially got hurt that Sakura likes Naruto! But I may be wrong and Sasuke is just twisting a knife in Naruto's back like Naruto thinks he is.

And- C'MON SASUKE! Get it TOGETHER! Kiss the hell out of Naruto, say you love him and apologize for being an ass!

Oh- And I loved when Naruto goes and marks the Curse seal on Sasuke. XDDD
AWESOME~ We approves!

*GLOMPS BACK*

[deeperifall]

WOW! Just wow O.O......

[xinexpressiblex]

Thanks homeslice!!! <3
<3 TJ

[blu_olivz]

god i am so riveted to this story, the suspense!! oh, the suspense!!
sasuke needs a good kick in the head D:
♥

[xinexpressiblex]

That's a compliment I haven't received yet! Riveted *clings* ^^ Thank you so much! And yeah, I totally agree. Sasuke is due for an ass kicking... though whether or not he'll receive said ass kicking is questionable ~_^
<3 TJ

[gonrie]

Hey!!!
Thank you sooo much for updating! I love so much this story!
It's cool to know you're Canadian too though you're probably an english canadian!
Anyway, update soon<
Gonrie

[xinexpressiblex]

No probs!!! Updating ish my anti-drug!!! :P

FIVE POINTS FOR BEING CANADIAN!!!!! <3<3<3 ^^ And French Canadian *more luff* that's worth at least another ten. I wish I could speak French, but my teacher was a bigoted asshole so I dropped the class ;_; Je suis tres mal. *hopes to god mal means sad and Je suis is I am*
<3 TJ

[xinexpressiblex]

No probs!!! Updating ish my anti-drug!!! :P

FIVE POINTS FOR BEING CANADIAN!!!!! <3<3<3 ^^ And French Canadian *more luff* that's worth at least another ten. I wish I could speak French, but my teacher was a bigoted asshole so I dropped the class ;_; Je suis tres mal. *hopes to god mal means sad and Je suis is I am*
<3 TJ