Kinking Sasunaru- the meme
Like Sasunaru/Narusasu? Like memes? Love kinks?
Well, here is a place to play with your favorite shinobi. Anonymous posters will request a kink on the main meme entry, and it is up to the viewership to complete those requests. The most important rule here is to have some kinky fun~!
Please be sure to read the general rules and guidelines before ( Read more... )
Well, here is a place to play with your favorite shinobi. Anonymous posters will request a kink on the main meme entry, and it is up to the viewership to complete those requests. The most important rule here is to have some kinky fun~!
Please be sure to read the general rules and guidelines before ( Read more... )
Naruto was silent for a long time. “I want my memories back,” he finally admitted so softly Sasuke had to strain to hear him. “I want to remember. I want to remember Jiraiya and Kakashi and Hokage-hag and Sakura-chan and you. I want to remember.”
Sasuke pulled him closer, his hands clenching around the back of Naruto’s shirt. His throat tightened. Not trusting himself to speak, he nodded. Inhaling deeply his lover’s specific scent, he clung to Naruto.
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Tsunade squeezed Naruto’s shoulder. “Everything will be fine,” she promised.
Naruto smiled widely at her. When she moved to stand beside him, outside of the circle Sasuke had drawn around Naruto, Sasuke noticed her eyes were unnaturally shiny.
They were in a room inside the Hokage Tower. It was underground; the only entrance, the door by which they had come in. Sakura, Kakashi, Iruka and Shizune waited outside. Inside the room, only the Hokage, Inoichi, Sasuke and Naruto remained. Naruto stood in the middle of the circle. Seals surrounded him, all leading to the mark Sasuke had painstakingly drawn on his forehead. With those precautions, the jutsu would target only what they wanted it to: the barrier surrounding part of Naruto’s mind.
“Ready, Naruto?” Inoichi asked easily as if he were asking if he were asking about the weather. Naruto grinned, but Sasuke could read the frailty in the lines of his smile. The Yamanaka glanced at Tsunade. She nodded.
Sasuke, kneeling on his circle, activated his Sharingan just as Inoichi’s hands began folding in a series of seals. His heart was pounding a painful tattoo. He watched the surge of chakra and he quickly ran his own through the painted lines. Sasuke could not control the smile that ghosted over his lips as he saw his seals work. The barrier was collapsing into itself, the seal on Naruto’s forehead absorbing the released and wild chakra.
It was finished. It was done. Naruto was fine.
Inoichi relaxed his pose. Sasuke lifted his fingers from the seal. Naruto grinned at Sasuke.
One lick of chakra flared to life.
“No!” Sasuke slammed both hands down on the dry ink.
Naruto’s eyes rolled into the back of his head. His entire body tensed, growing exceedingly still as it seized. And like a puppet with its strings cut, Naruto collapsed.
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Tsunade had rushed Naruto into the hospital two hours ago. They still hadn’t come out of the room.
The wait was killing Sasuke. The feeling of not knowing, every doubt creeping up, every possible mistake reflected everywhere he looked. If after if after if after if ran through his mind. If he’d kept his hands on the seal, if he’d not grown confident, if he had killed that ninja before he used that jutsu, if Naruto didn’t remember anything, if after if after if after if.
He wasn’t allowed in the examination room, but he had just decided anyone who tried to stop him could sit on their shuriken. He stood up and was about to slam the door down when it opened.
He felt the others behind him stir, but his attention was focused on the yellow color still inside the room.
He brushed past Tsunade who didn’t try to stop him. Instead, she closed the door behind him, leaving only a small gap open.
Naruto’s eyes were closed, his chest rising and falling in slow rhythm. He was pale against the burnished yellow of his hair. Sasuke swallowed heavily as he touched his fingertips to Naruto’s wrist.
“Naruto?” Sasuke almost didn’t recognize his voice. Too small, too unsure, too afraid.
Blue eyes fluttered open. For a moment, they stared above, unfocused, dazed. Then, they focused on Sasuke’s still and barely breathing form.
“Sasuke?” Naruto squinted his eyes slightly. “Sasuke?”
“Yes, Naruto.” A faint tremble suffused his palms.
“Sasuke? …You look like a girl.”
Everything collapsed around him.
They were back where they had started. But that was fine. He could work with that. He would tell Naruto everything, stay with him, let him choose Sasuke again. And he would never allow Naruto near that fucking jutsu again. Hell, he would probably need guards to ensure he didn’t kill that enemy nin.
Suddenly, an obnoxious grin spread across Naruto’s face. “Just kidding. You ought to look at your face, Sasuke-bastard.”
“You fucking little bastard!” Sasuke punched Naruto as hard as he could.
“Ah!” Naruto curled around his abdomen. “God, Sasuke, can’t you take a joke?”
Sasuke grabbed him by the lapels of his shirt. “That. Wasn’t. Funny.”
Naruto’s eyes widened. “Sasuke…are you crying?”
Dropping him, Sasuke hurriedly turned away. “Of course not,” he spat.
“Sasuke?” He felt Naruto’s fingers brush the back of his shirt. “I’m sorry, Sasuke. Okay? It’s just-I don’t-jokes are the only way I can deal with this. It was…scary.”
It was the confession, rather than the apology, that made Sasuke turn around.
Naruto was sitting up, his head bowed. “I’m…I’m sorry, Sasuke. Please don’t leave.”
Sasuke observed the slouched shoulders, the clenched hands. Slowly stepping forward, he skimmed his fingers across the line of Naruto’s jaw. Naruto tilted his head up, surprise and hope marring his face. Sasuke slanted his mouth over Naruto’s, luxuriating in the feeling of feeling the motion returned.
It wasn’t deep. It wasn’t passionate. It wasn’t long. But it was enough. Sasuke dropped to his knees, hiding his face in Naruto’s lap. Something damp burned its way down his cheeks, but he ignored it. He focused on the warmth of Naruto, his weight as the blond bent over him. He luxuriated in the feel of Naruto’s breathing, the pounding of his heart and the way his arms tightened around Sasuke with the same need Sasuke clutched him.
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I want an epilogue.
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Actually, that's not where my train of thought was at all. I just want to see the aftermath, and how Sasuke deals with it - would things go back to the way they were? Or would Sasuke be careful around Naruto for a few weeks, just in case something went wrong? How would this experience affect their missions, and their life together? Even if there was sex in it - which I wouldn't complain about - for this story I'd be more interested in Sasuke's thought process while it was happening than the actual sex itself. Because I can't imagine this not affecting Sasuke to some extent - he'd be different around Naruto for awhile, and I want to know how.
Although lemons are good, too. :)
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Sasuke would panic at the sight of anything making contact with Naruto’s head. The first time it happened, he almost attacked Tsunade. ANBU had been about to restrain him when she waved them off and punched the recalcitrant leader who wouldn’t unhand Sasuke. She had told him to relax, that it wouldn’t happen again-a promise she forgot when Naruto barged in the next day, telling her alcohol was the reason she looked so old.
Heh, as much as I can feel for Sasuke's panic, this also makes me lol.
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And I didn't get a chance to comment back earlier, but I'm really looking forward to reading this with the missing parts.
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Sasuke pulled him closer, his hands clenching around the back of Naruto’s shirt. His throat tightened. Not trusting himself to speak, he nodded. Inhaling deeply his lover’s specific scent, he clung to Naruto. from this line, I started to tear up. And I cried. Quietly. So good. &hearts
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I'M INCOHERENT! SLKJF:DSLA
I loved everyone's characterizations (Sasukeeee ;A;) and Naruto's reactions were perfect, I loved it! He was so cute, and I really appreciated his characterization and how un-onedimensional he is, even with being transported mind-wise back to the very beginning of the series. I was smiling the whole way through with warm and fuzzy feelings and aw-ing at Sasuke (I'm a huge sap, I love it when Sasuke's so in love). I loved their accidental kiss and Sakura fainting (XDD) and... the fic is really awesome, fun, and a joy to read, but as I neared the end I was wondering if they would get up to anything... and then comes that uber hot and sweet make-out scene. ggahh ♥ THXSOMUCH FOR WRITING THIS!! ♥♥*off to reread again*
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And Epilogue!! I too liked how Sasuke was afraid of things being thrown at Naruto's head, and how Tsunade still couldn't help it. xD
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I read this like 5 times today. Seriously. I love this fic so much it's embarrassing. e3e I hope it makes you happy rather than creeped out. LOLLLL;;;;
And I'll definately be checking out the complete version, of course! And memming it. yoosshh <3333
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Really, this was utterly joyful to read. I'm really, really, really, really, really in awe of your writing! XD And you write quickly too.
Do you mind if I ask you how you plan your stories? I'm just curious - like do you make an outline and stick to it? Because I'm a very slow writer and when I try to write, I do plan things out in my head but nothing ever goes according to plan and I end up pulling my hair out and hating everything I write...so any tips from you would be treasured dearly XD
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