Title Control.
Word count: 2200
Summary: Jared and Jensen Continue to explore the new aspects of their relationship and what it means to give up control to another. Both of them come to an important decision about the nature of their relationship.
Pairing: J2
Warnings: Dom/Sub themes.
Rating: NC-17
Notes: This is a continuation of the verse I
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You think my sex scenes are ok? I'm never sure about them, and yours are great don't run them down.
I will happily help to nudge you along, band together and circle the wagons I say.
By the way ideas to continue with, Jared hurt on set resulting in temporary blindness. Jensen giving up control and I'm thinking of trying to write a scene with Jared working by touch and sound, helping Jared keep himself grounded.
Other one, Jared breaking his own rule, taking the bracelet off because Jensen is ill with a fever, and it's the only way he can get through to Jensen. Then dealing with Jared's guilt after.
Finally its been niggling at me for a while, the return of the Dom from Take Care Of You, he struck me as the type you don't say no to. Thinking of having him snatch Jensen and having Jared, Chris and Steve go to the rescue.
But I really want to complete my first multi chap first, or write them together! damn having an overactive imagination.
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Yours are gorgeous! Descriptive and OHSOHAWT!! And yes ma'am...though I feel they do need work.
Eeee!! We're all in this together bb!!
Ohhhh - that sounds LOVELY!! GODS, YES!! DO EEET!!!
Oh man...that next one! Gods, to break his trust like that?! WOW...I...that will be delicious!! *Is excited!*
YESYESYES THIIISSS!!! *Faints!!* GODS YES!! I!! *Flaps!!*
*Is ded!!*
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Any help with the sex scenes is always wellcome!
I feel we're in this together, one of my friends was nearly driven away from writing J2 due to nonnies (anonymous commentators) so as I said circle the wagons.
Well inspiration strikes I have plot ideas it will just be finding time to write them.
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OY.
Sorry - got lost there for a moment.
Ack! That's horrible!! *Clings to you*
Yes, it is always the time for it, lol!!
*hugs you*
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