Ah, this was so neat! And it was fun to learn more about Gil, whom I only just met in the last fic--headcanon, character study, is there a difference? XD Anyway, I really love the way the Holzfaller exploits and Wulfenbach italics play with another in the narrative here, imagining what seems and what is. My favorite scene was the second to last one, with the girls passing on stories and in essence making the imaginary real--because what is 'real,' really, but a story that gets believed? And the cadence o the lines Gil Holzfaller was wild. / Gil Wulfenbach was bored is wondrous. Thank you for sharing this!
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