I make no excuse. Original Poem

[sarlania]

I swear my neurons are against me. Does inspiration HAVE TO come when I have an exam tomorrow? Evidently. Does inspiration have to come in the form of a poem - a poem about porn? Apparently it does. Somehow I don't think this is what I had in mind when I decided to write more original fic.

TITLE: And I forgive him
RATING: R for shower sex.
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Comments

[starrylizard]

Hey poetry I can get behind. *bad pun sorry*
Very vivid, hon! I like it. :)

[sarlania]

Thank dear! I do have to say that I love and have a fascination for the shower which is probably why I decided to write this quirky little thing.

Don't you like poetry?

And speaking of puns, I was responding to a facebook query of a friend about Journey's End and the Doctor's hand the the 12 regeneration limit, and I told her that:

Your guess is as good as mine. Fandom is divided on this point but it is certainly interesting to see how the producers are going to get out of the twelve regeneration limit though Moffat said that it's going to be addressed soon in a very "off hand manner"

I didn't even notice the pun until it was pointed out to me. *facepalms*

[spikesgirl58]

Mmm, very nice - fingers spread playing tenths - beautiful put and exact while seeming somehow vague. Nicely done with the imagery! I don't know why people are so fast to dismiss poetry - it can speak as loud, if not more so, than any story.

More?

Brava, my sweet!

[sarlania]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I love poetry myself but I always struggle with the rhyming and pentameter when I write it.

More? I certainly hope so! =)