Setting Rain on Fire 2/?

[sari_m]

 Chapter Two: Echoing Silence

“No one dared disturb the sound of silence.”
The Sound of Silence, Simon and Garfunkel

Rachel Berry is so stupid.

It’s the only thought my pounding head manages to hold on to as Brittany and I sit in the darkened bar belonging to some friend of Puck - some guy named Mark or Harry - drinking out hearts out with all the

Comments

[spashbritt]

This is so sad :(
But I like it!

[sari_m]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you appreciate it. Hope you stick with me 'till the end of the story.

[littlemusical]

This is heart-breaking but I'm still left wanting to know what's going to happen next. Update. Please.

[sari_m]

Thank you so much. And because you said please, I'll be uploading Chapter 4 in a few minutes. :) Hope you like the story till the end.

[fall_into_life]

I think "futurish" is a little misleading for this fic. When I see "futurish" as a descriptor, I think either Repo! the Genetic Opera or Tron, and this is nowhere near either (thank god; I don't think Santana's skin tone would tolerate LED well).

Other than that, just one small flaw: "drinking out hearts out with all the alcoholic beverages we could get our unsteady hands on." should be "drinking OUR hearts out".

Reading on.