Setting Rain on Fire 5/?

[sari_m]

i dedicate this chapter to the delightful, delicious, dazzling Naya Rivera, who makes me question my own sexuality. hahaha

Chapter Five: Dying to Escape

“Deep in the cell of my heart, I will be so glad to go.”

Asleep, Emily Browning

I stop yelling the second Brittany slumps unto the floor, unconscious. I rush to her, panic kicking in with an

Comments

[dsachao]

I found this story a while back, but I didn't want to read it and get too into it and then wait ages for an update, but you've been updating so regularly. This was sooooo worth the wait. Everything is just so raw and true and horrible at the same time because people are ignorant and stupid and wow this story is just amazing. Thank you for writing it, it definitely needed to be written. Weirdly, it also reminded me of a play called 'rabbit hole' which is about grief too.

[sari_m]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you decided to read it. And I'm glad you liked it.

Rabbit Hole? Thanks, I'll try to read up on it. One of the biggest challenges I've faced writing this particular story is that I don't have first-hand experience with losing a child. In fact, I've never really experienced losing a loved one. So thanks a lot for telling me about the play. :)

[20kels]

Quinn is an amazing friend, I love the way she's not giving up, and the way you write her role, she's totally there for Santana and Brittany when they need their friends the most. Sad but amazing as always.

[sari_m]

Thank you very much. :) Yeah, I just love Quinn. I just wish they made her more involved in the Brittana storyline on the actual show.

[vondrunkaton]

Wow. You kind of turned up the heat on this one, huh? Very heavy. The circumstances surrounding their son's death are just horrible and awful - no wonder they're having such a tough time. It makes total sense that Santana would be blaming herself and that Brittany would be having nightmares after what she saw. Good development.

I also liked that Brittany overheard Santana talking about how they couldn't fix things - it's a good catalyst to shake them out of the motions they've been going through for three months. I expect things to get angstier and darker before they get better, but that's okay. It's a lot of stuff to process as a couple. I just hope they're able to come through it still together.

Great writing, once again! I also love how frequently you're updating!

[sari_m]

Thank you very, very much! :)

I'm glad you think the development was good. Honestly, initially I was a bit worried about how everything was going, but now I feel reassured.

Yup, there is still much more to come. I hope you like how everything turns out.

Yeah, this is my first fan fiction, and quite frankly it's proven to be quite therapeutic, so I can't seem to resist updating. xD

[littlemusical]

*sniffles* This was sooooo good. All I could think was, "noooooo!"
The explanation as to why the little boy died was brilliant and deep and heart-wrenching and I actually wanted to cry when reading it.
I hope you don't leave it for long chick. I need an update.

Also...Heather Morris makes me question MY sexuality lol. You're not alone ;P

[sari_m]

Give me a few hours and I'll post the latest chapter. Schoolwork caught up with me. I completely forgot it was Finals week. xD

I'm glad you liked how the story played out so far.

Yep, totally. Naya and HeMo. I can't stop listening to I love New York/New York New York. Just, awesome.

[spashbritt]

Omg.. I'm crying.. is the first time a story makes me cry :(
Your writing is so good.. Thanks for updating! I love that you don't make us wait too long :)

[sari_m]

Thank you. I can't seem to resist updating. xD

Awww, you cried! Sorry about that. I hope you feel much better now.