Fic: No Ordinary Servant (Merlin/Arthur)

[sarcasticbabble]

Title: No Ordinary Servant
Author: sarcasticchick
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 4000+
Summary: But this ... with this Merlin felt the need to protest. He couldn't raise his hands any higher than his shoulders from exhaustion - surely that meant something?Disclaimer: Merlin and Arthur (in this form, because in this form they

Comments

[lilithilien]

*bounces like a mad killer hare* How much do I love that there's a mad killer hair attacking Arthur!!!

This is so wonderful! Merlin is so perfectly bitter, and with such just cause! I especially love his growing curses with each step hauling water -- that's masterfully done -- and his pure loathing when he gets Arthur undressed and he's clean and doesn't need a bath after all. Poor Merlin!

And then... "Get in." Guh. I just love how you've written Arthur's imperious tone here, not tolerating Merlin's hesitation. (And because he doesn't want him to stink around him tomorrow, yeah, right...)

This is some gorgeous smexxin here! Those fingers on his throat (hello, breathy kink, glad you made it!) and that "Shh... I've got you" ... well, I already told you how tingle-happy that whole paragraph is!

But that's not enough ... you turn this into a reveal story, and Arthur is so wonderfully accepting of it, and yes, very, very lucky -- and he knows it. That just makes this so much better!

*hugs tight* This is a marvelous foray into a new fandom not that you need a new fandom or anything! Thank you for cheering me up and cheering me on!!

[lilithilien]

And killer hair = killer hare. Unless Matt Smith is biting at Arthur's ankles.

[sarcasticchick]

*snerks*

Matt Smith or IL gov Blago...both men have killer hair that threatens the safety of all...

[sarcasticchick]

How much do I love that there's a mad killer hair attacking Arthur!!!

After Monty Python's 'Holy Grail,' how could I resist? ;)

This is some gorgeous smexxin here! Those fingers on his throat (hello, breathy kink, glad you made it!)But that's not enough ... you turn this into a reveal story

Talk about another total kink. I don't think I could attempt a Merlin/Arthur story and *not* work it in, no matter how cracky the fic. The 'verse just demands it.

*hugs tight* This is a marvelous foray into a new fandom not that you need a new fandom or anything! Thank you for cheering me up and cheering me on!!

*hugs back* I don't know if I should be thanking you or cursing you for strong-arming me into the fandom. ;) But definitely glad it worked for you! *G* Hope you get through this week without pulling all your hair out or yelling at stupid clients over the phone!