The Windhovers (3 of 10)

May 26, 2008 17:24

Title: The Windhovers
Chapter: 3 of 10
Author: sarcasticchick
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: R
Spoilers: TW S1, S2
Fluffers/Betas: lilithilienSummary: "A hallucination is a fact, not an error; what is erroneous is a judgement based upon it." - Bertrand Russell ( Read more... )

fic, janto, windhovers

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itoshii_chan May 26 2008, 22:52:23 UTC
... I think if this happened to me, the first conclusion that people would come to is that I'm insane...

... and I AM, mind you, but I think there's a perfectly, logical explanation to what's happening to Ianto. *nodnod*

I'M SO EXCITED! I WANNA READ MORE! I CAN'T WAIT!! ^________________^

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sarcasticchick May 27 2008, 19:46:26 UTC
*g*

but this is TW - it's always alien!

right?

more's coming. soon. *g* thanks for reading1

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lefaym May 26 2008, 22:57:34 UTC
Your last paragraph just killed me.

I'm loving this story.

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sarcasticchick May 27 2008, 19:48:46 UTC
aw - it was sort of meant to ;)

*whistles innocently*

thanks for reading!

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lilithilien May 26 2008, 23:00:31 UTC
I love this chapter, you do such a good job showing how poor Ianto keeps getting pushed closer and closer to the edge, and how control is slipping away from him. And Jack is wonderful, especially when Ianto gets so defensive and he just says, "What I was going to say, is your father deceased as well?" Such a perfect Jack response.

I love how this story is developing!

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sarcasticchick May 27 2008, 19:52:26 UTC
how -much- can i push ianto? that is the question. *g*

*has batman flashbacks with your icon*

i'm so evil. but, all in part of the story!

it's a good thing ianto!muse generally loves me ...

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lilithilien May 27 2008, 20:23:51 UTC
Oh, Ianto's a big boy, he can take a *lot* more than that.

*wishes you were at IJ so I could icon with hoochie mama*

*hint hint*

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sarcasticchick May 27 2008, 22:34:45 UTC
aw mac.

ooh, i forgot about IJ. i always do that, don't i?

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thirstyrobot May 26 2008, 23:02:20 UTC
Ooh, well done. You really capture the tension and surreal confusion, and the last two lines are just the right flavor of heartwrenching.

And oh dear. I really hope there's some cause beyond 'Ianto's going off the deep end.'

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sarcasticchick May 27 2008, 19:54:48 UTC
what, you don't think he's just going mad? ;)

thank you! and thanks for reading :)

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heidisvenson May 26 2008, 23:18:16 UTC
i just thought that I'd let you know that I am currently doing a little happy dance. Not because Ianto is (maybe crazy) hurting, not because his parents are dead (but you sure do like to kill off his mom...poor lady), but because this is an awesome story! YAY!

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sarcasticchick May 27 2008, 19:56:20 UTC
huh. i -have- killed off ianto's mom twice, haven't i? and in another (as yet unposted) fic, i do it again, essentially.

i hope this isn't some ... deep-rooted freudian pathology... *snerks*

thank you, and thanks for reading!

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