Fic: Multicolored Chaos (S1: Chap 3, SoI 10), Jack/Ianto

[sarcasticbabble]

Chapter Title: Multicolored Chaos (S1: Chap 3, SoI 10)
Author: sarcasticchick
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: TW S1
Fluffers/Betas: lilithilien, fivealive
Summary: Finding his way again...
A/N: This loosely covers Episodes 5 and 6.

For Shades of Ianto series information, please see Prologue, Chapter 1

Previous Chapters:
Prologue: Chapters 1-7 (Complete)
S1:

Comments

[goddessaeaa]

wow.. that was beautiful. I love the way the emotion in the story is tangible to the reader (or me, at least) ad the way Ianto and Jack's relationship is slowly mending, becoming stronger than it was before.

Owen's 'scene' was also fantastic... it's nice to see Owen being something other than a prat.

I really do hope that Ianto tells Jack about his spying soon, and that Jack realises that Ianto was with-holding information from Ms White. Hopefully making it easier for Jack to forgive him.

Well done on another fantastic chapter

[sarcasticchick]

good good - i'm glad the devel of their relationship is working. it was something that i wanted to focus on - particularly - how the show jumps from cyberwoman to stopwatches to ianto weeping into jack's coat. too much to understand with so little screen time!

eh, owen's still a prat. ;) but maybe less of a total prat.

what? spying? i was just going to let that storyline drop and have janto go dancing in the fields wearing daisychain necklaces and holding hands...

;)

[pike2]

This just gets better and better.

[sarcasticchick]

hey, if you keep writing shine, i'll keep writing SoI. how about that deal? ;)

[pike2]

The problem is that the next chapter is meant to be the last one.

But the plot bunny has just given me the start of the next one - although I have to finish my SG1 fic first!!!

Some secrets are dangerous!

Now all I have to do is find another song.....

[sarcasticchick]

*eyes you* sg1 fic??

wouldn't happen to be jack/daniel, would it? *g*

last chapter, eh? dammit. altho, if you have a plot bunny for a new one.... *tempts plot bunny w/ chocolate*

[crabby_lioness]

Beautiful.

[sarcasticchick]

thanky :)

[anisaguine]

*is puddle on floor*

is it weird that I think that sex on top of the Millenium Centre is sweet?

and I loved this:
"Who'd they try to reason with? The Daleks or the Cybermen?"
"As I understand it, the Cybermen."

[sarcasticchick]

nope, not weird at all.

cause if it were weird....well...it came from my mind. so, while that might make it crazy, it's not weird. ;)

*g* honestly? i was laughing my ass off picturing those two sharing their mutual disdain for the psychology field.

[sarcasticchick]

guuuuh.

can you imagine that overhead shot?

forget seeing nekkid owen/rhys. i want to see nekkid janto action. *sends pleas and beggings to RTD*

*sniggers* ah yes. well, i can't imagine jack holding much stock in 21st century psychology ;) and ianto...well...nope. can't see it. *g*