I'm Sorry It Took So Long - T - Puck/Rachel - OneShot

Jul 02, 2011 23:15


Title: I'm Sorry It Took So Long (To See I Loved You All Along)
Category: Glee
Genre: Drama/Romance
Ship: Puck/Rachel
Rating: Teen
Warning(s): Coarse Language
Prompt: Rachel knows she's in love when she sees Puck march in a Pride parade supporting Kurt. by neimans - puckrachel drabble meme (part 8)
Word Count: 3,222
Summary: It only takes a split second for her ( Read more... )

fic: sorry it took so long, drabble meme, author: sarcastic_fina, oneshot - glee - puckleberry, ship: puck/rachel, status: complete

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smartalli July 3 2011, 07:01:45 UTC
*sigh*

So lovely, Fina. So, so lovely.

Please excuse me while I go melt into a puddle.

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sarcastic_fina July 4 2011, 06:52:04 UTC
haha, aww, I'm glad you liked it. I really liked writing this. I have a list of prompts I want to complete and this one jumped out at me. I've never been to a Pride parade myself, but I support it entirely. And I love the idea of Puck just strutting down the street like, "Yeah, my friend's gay, it's cool." I wanted it to be that he did it 'cause he supported Kurt, not necessarily because he wanted Rachel to notice. He had no intention of it being a reason for her to live him, it was just naturally him. It was really fun to write and see where it went, because I didn't have much of a plan in mind, haha. My muse goes where it wants but I really how this one turned out!

I'm really glad you liked it!! Thanks so much for reading/commenting!

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amandabrooke08 July 3 2011, 07:39:38 UTC
And once again you've simply amazed me. I do believe you are the only person who can capture these two characters as accurately as you do. Another wonderful job. =)

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sarcastic_fina July 4 2011, 06:52:53 UTC
Aww, thank you, that's incredible flattering. I spend entirely too much time waffling over whether or not they're in character and every word and gesture, so it really does mean a lot to know I've got them down! I'm really glad you liked this piece!

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greydawning July 3 2011, 09:27:46 UTC
So much perfection...

First of all, the image of man's man Noah Puckerman walking in the Pride Parade, cool as you please, to support Kurt, made me melt. Then what happened afterwards, and him saying this line "I know you're not in love with me, but it'll happen, okay? I-I can love you enough for both of us"...well, that just about broke my heart. And Rachel's speech, and just how perfect the two of them are, put it all back together.

Thanks again for sharing, Lee. This was amazing ♥

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sarcastic_fina July 4 2011, 06:55:21 UTC
Right!? I love the imagery. I can honestly see Puck out there too. He's come so far from the pilot and he really would support Kurt like that and not even worry about anybody else questioning his sexuality.

I really love the idea of Puck just being so into their relationship and loving her so much that he believes he can get her to fall for him and he's willing to fight for it and stick around for however long it takes. And I love writing Rachel speeches; they're kind of addicting. It's funny because I'd originally started out writing only from Puck's POV because I felt I understood him more and now lately it seems like I'm writing a lot from Rachel's POV. She's really quite a fun character to delve into!

Thanks for reading and commenting!! I'm so glad you liked it!♥

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ajjha July 3 2011, 10:32:53 UTC
Everything you write is simply amazing. This was beautiful! Total love.

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sarcastic_fina July 4 2011, 06:55:43 UTC
Aww, thank you, sweetie!

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ellashy July 3 2011, 12:01:21 UTC
OMG my heart is all a flutter... Your stories are way better then the show, I want you to know that :)

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sarcastic_fina July 4 2011, 06:57:05 UTC
haha, aww, thank you! You flatter me! I'm literally blushing right now! ^_^

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