The War of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Three

[sarcastic_fina]

Title: The War of Fate
Series: Fate - Part II of III
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Angst/Drama/Humor/Action
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 4,503
Summary: Following the loss of his brother, Dean vows to keep his promise and live the apple-pie life with Chloe, but God has other ideas. Trying to put himself together, Dean sets

Comments

[brisbanite]

Y'know... having having the hungry mood right after Devin is about to be eaten.... kinda creepy :P

Great chapter as always. I like the final scene with Devin... OCs are a difficult beast but right now I dont know if she's around to stay or is monster fodder, which makes it all the more suspenseful.

While I have the urge to slap Dean, I also appreciate getting to see him go through the grief and fear of getting hurt again by losing Chloe.

[sarcastic_fina]

Y'know... having having the hungry mood right after Devin is about to be eaten.... kinda creepy :P

Yes, probably! haha

I found Devin oddly easy to write; I think it's because I'd been putting together her personality in my head for so long. I had plans for her weeks before I ever started writing The War of Fate, haha. She's fun and snarky and she provides a nice outside pov.

It was hard to write Dean when he decided he'd just have to accept it if Chloe died, but I also wanted to show that as much as he *says* that and maybe even wants to *feel* that way, it's not the case. It's been interesting to field his emotions and try and put across where's at and why.

An update to come very soon! :)

[ashbail256]

Great chapter. I really like your OC. I've always wanted you to write an OC for Sams love interest. Anyway, I feel so bad for Dean and Chloe. You got me near tears with this one. Great job. Update soon.

[sarcastic_fina]

I'm glad! I wasn't sure how people would react to Devin, but I like her.

She won't be Sam's love interest, though, I'm afraid. His love interest won't be coming in for awhile. I'm not sure yet if she'll come in later in War or Future... haven't decided yet.

Should have an update out soon!! :)

[vamp1987]

I take it Chloe and Devin will be meeting each other again in the upcoming chapter. Have to say that with her personality, Devin will fit in just fine with the family of hunters.

[sarcastic_fina]

Have to say that with her personality, Devin will fit in just fine with the family of hunters.

That's exactly what I was going for! haha I think you have to have a certain kind of personality to fit in with their world. :)

[cold_queen_5]

No, sweetie, he IS going to eat you alive.

Also, I really love how realistic you're being with Dean and Chloe. No fairy-tale happily ever after for them, just real problems for people who came out of a very bad situation.

[sarcastic_fina]

Also, I really love how realistic you're being with Dean and Chloe. No fairy-tale happily ever after for them, just real problems for people who came out of a very bad situation.

I wasn't sure if many readers would stick around through this part, because it does get very dark and sad, and as you said *realistic*. As much as I want them to get their happily ever after, it hasn't been offered up on a platter. And even if it had, I think Dean would be suspicious, haha.

[camfan4ever]

Teriffic chapter! Can't wait for more.

But, I know Dean's grieving but he needs to take the pissy attitude down a notch. It'll be interesting to see how everything goes.

[sarcastic_fina]

Dean will be reminded his pissy attitude is not wanted or needed, but he's having some issued controlling his emotions and he's not dealing well.

Should have an update very soon! ^_^