The Heart of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Thirty-Three

[sarcastic_fina]

Title: The Heart of Fate
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: My Bloody Valentine, Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid, Dark Side of the Moon, 99 Problems, Point of No Return, Hammer of the Gods, The Devil You Know, Two Minutes to Midnight (Season 5)
Word Count: 5,580
Summary: With a little help from

Comments

[juju84]

This was a beautiful one! Cas was hilarious as ever and Lois…! lol
Dean is great! It’d be the best wedding gift for Chloe!
I’m a little hoping to see all the JL present but than again it’d be great to have this small wedding with just them! Though I do want Dean and Sam meet the boys! ^_^
I bet it’d be one hell of a meeting! ^_^
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

[camfan4ever]

Ah, Lois, how I've missed you... Loved this so much.

"It's a trick! The devil's found my weakness and exploited it!"

*Dies laughing*

Oh Cas/coffee, my fave paring.

Fan-freaking-tastic! Loved Sam's awkwardness in the mall and the giggly teens.

Can't wait for more.

[iluvaqt]

I think it has to be the fact that it's so close to them getting married and all my favorite characters are in this chapter that it's the best yet! :D

The doubts both of them had, not about each other but about whether this was the right thing to do all things considered. And I love that Dean called Lois. It just proves how well he knows Chloe's heart and mind. He's won me over years ago but with that call, I think I just fell in love with him a little more.

And Cas, Chloe and Sam's shopping experience was both hilarious, fun and endearing. Sam reassuring her and welcoming her to the family. Even leaping to her defense misunderstanding Cas.

I love Cas so much. I think you're actually the one who got me stuck and hooked on the idea of Cas/Chloe. :P

"You are very physically appealing." I heart that line so much!

[vamp1987]

So cute! Not only is Cas caffinated but he's shopping. I loved the iced coffee bit. He needs to learn to drink things ate a slower rate, and omg, blaming it on Satan being his first thought was awesome! Oh, and it was so sweet for Dean to call Lois. He knew how much Chloe wanted her there and he made sure she was. Can't wait for the ceremony. Hopefully this one will happen without a disaster in the middle.

[maka2000]

I loved the brain freeze scene! Those really are the devil's handiwork, for sure. Imagining those 3 at the mall was just so much fun though, and I'm all excited for the wedding. It was completely touching Dean thought to contact Lois for Chloe. What a loving surprise for her! I enjoyed this chapter so much.