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The Heart of Fate - NC17 - Chloe/Dean - Chapter Twenty-Eight

Jul 08, 2010 13:53

Title: The Heart of Fate
Category: Smallville/Supernatural
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Ship: Chloe/Dean
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: My Bloody Valentine, Dead Men Don't Wear Plaid, Dark Side of the Moon, 99 Problems, Point of No Return, Hammer of the Gods, The Devil You Know (Season 5)
Word Count: 6,255
Summary: With a little help from Cupid, Dean gets exactly ( Read more... )

fic: the heart of fate, author: sarcastic_fina, series: fate, novel - sv/spn - chlean, ship: chloe/dean

Comments 17

coolbeanie July 8 2010, 21:25:12 UTC

I'm so in love with this story. I also love having something to look forward to at the end of my long days at work! Thank you for creating this AMAZING story!

belle8472 July 8 2010, 21:35:40 UTC

I vote that Drunk!Sam (annoying as he may be) would be more fun to be around than Mopey!Sam. This episode was really good, but until I realized what was actually going on (ie. the history in question), I was super confused. Anyway, great chapter. I like the in-between chapters, you know, the ones that advance the stories, but I've got to tell you, Lee (can I call you Lee? Whoops, too late!), I really, really like the chapters with smut. Like, like more than a friend.

So, I end this comment as: Excited for more Crowley, Excited for more Chlean, and Wanting a Drunk!Sam to play with. Like, more than friends...

sarcastic_fina July 8 2010, 21:46:17 UTC

lol, feel encouraged to call me Lee! ;)

Drunk!Sam was all kinds of awesome to write.

There's more smut in... two chapters, I believe. The one after the next, I think. And I'm just about to write a very, very smutastic chapter now, so you're in luck! haha

Glad you liked it!

iluvaqt July 8 2010, 22:38:11 UTC

hahah, aren't they a domesticated pair. :D Crowley insinuating that he'd heard all Dean and Chloe's inimate moments was funny and really sleazy but he's a demon and then drunk Sam pressing the issue further was even more uncomfortable but considering he knows his brother's past, his curiousity is understandable. It a complete about face for him.

I loved their bonding moment and then Chloe taking care of him. Sam being a big baby. But he is the youngest after all. And the comparison of Clark and Sam. :) And how she felt in their hugs. Awesome!

latetothpartyhp July 8 2010, 23:34:36 UTC

You know, I am really taking a shine to this Crowley guy. He's got style.

ovariesofsteel July 9 2010, 01:07:50 UTC

I love drunk!Sam.