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Making Up For Lost Time - Chloe/Bart - NC17

Jul 07, 2009 21:51

Title: Making Up For Lost Time
Category: Smallville
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairing: Chloe/Bart
Word Count: 4,181
Prompt: “If you could go one day without powers…” - lilmoochie
Summary: A lighthearted night together turns into something far more intimate.

Previous: When Right Began, All In,
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oneshot - smallville - chlart, author: sarcastic_fina, ship: chloe/bart

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sarcastic_fina July 8 2009, 05:58:07 UTC

I'm really not sure... I love these two and so far, it's just been these three connecting oneshots... not a full-fledged story. I'd need a really good plot behind it and a lot of motivation. But with so many of my stories on the backburner already, I'm going to have to put the idea of a full out Chlart on the "Still thinking about it..." list. Sorry! But maybe in the future, I just might. :)

traceydoodles July 8 2009, 07:20:26 UTC

Holey Moley! that was intense ;)
I love the trust that Chloe has in Bart, their just so comfortable around each and can really be themselves. You've outdone yourself yet again! More please :)

angelbsb July 8 2009, 07:51:16 UTC

that was awesome . you made this pairing come alive to me . it was sweet and beautiful .

mfsaw2003 July 8 2009, 07:56:34 UTC

i remembered the first two stories but seeing this continuation was quite the surprise. i've always loved the idea of bart with chloe because he seems to be the only male smallville character who wasn't instantly mesmerized by the double Ls and genuinely liked chloe. i could believe that without provocation and given the chance, bart would love chloe and never look at another woman. so, bravo this was awesome and if you get the inspiration to write more i'll definitely read it. great job!!!

lilmoochie July 8 2009, 11:56:42 UTC

Holy wow Fina this was flippin' amazing..

His hands cupped her face, thumbs stroking her cheeks. “I’d happily hold you all night if that’s what you want.”

And with those words, she took a deep breath and realized how foolish she’d been. It wasn’t nerves so much as anticipation; she was worried because she wanted this to be great, she wanted this to be a moment to remember. Because this was Bart and her; it was them.

The desriptions of how chloe sees him and how the others see him is just....wow.... I loved this...heck of a way to use a prompt.....thanks.... lm