Guardian Angel - NC17 - Chloe/Bruce - Chapter Nine

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Title: Guardian Angel
Category: Smallville/Batman (Crossover)
Rating: NC17
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama
Pairing: Chloe/Bruce Wayne
Word Count: 1,964
Summary: Her guardian angel was a dark man with a fetish for rodents. Figures.

Previous: Chapter One, Chapter Two, Chapter Three, Chapter Four,  Chapter Five,  Chapter Six, Chapter Seven, Chapter Eight,

Comments

[vannadear]

Awww no more? I need my fix woman! This was such a great addition to an already addictive story. I always love how you keep them so true to character; Chloe already getting the inkling about the Bruce/Batman secret. I'm so excited to see what's next on the agenda, and the Joker angle...squee! Love it, More please!!!

[asah21]

Fantastic work!I really enjoy the way you write all the characters. They're just so real. greate job cant waite to find out how the date goes wiv chloe/bruce

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This was fantastic. I think it's my new favorite chapter.

The Chlo-Lo in the beginning was so adorable. I love how Lois is trying to get Chloe to hook up with Bruce. And Clark and Lois arguing was so funny. I could just imagine all of this in my head.

The Chloe-Batman conversation was amazing!

"No offence, but you're kinda blowing my cover."

He glanced at her, eyes raking from top to bottom. His lips pursed.

She scoffed. "Like a batsuit is much better," she told him, rolling her eyes.

"It's safer than jeans and a sweatshirt," he growled.

She shook her head. "Yeah, and the pointy ears fend off mosquitoes." She sighed. "To what do I owe the drop in? Usually you wait for me to be attacked and then tell me I told you

The dialogue continues to crack me up!

I love the meaningful conversation they had and you do a wonderful job in writing in the UST. Love how Chloe is confused between Bruce and Batman.

I really enjoy the way you write all the characters. They're just so real.

Fantastic work!

[moonstar_sfu]

Great update, the banter between Chloe and Batman is fantastic. Can't wait to see what happens on the date.

[alexis374]

love love LOVE. the banter is always perfect. lois cracks me up in this story - she's always saying what everyone is thinking.
lovely continuation of a great story... can't wait for more!!!!!

[pamie884]

I was more than a little excited to see this story updated! I don't know why, but I'm really not to fond of Lois on the show, but the way you write her and her interactions with Chloe, I actually LIKE her lol.

Loved the Batman/Chloe interaction, as usual.

Can't wait for more :)