Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-ToraxUruha, MiyavixSaga, Sa-chap 6/?
hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!
!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!
Title: Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english is not my mother-tongue..
pairings: ToraxUruha, MiyavixSaga, Sagax? (mentioned ( Read more... )
Aw, Hiroto seems pretty drawn to Kai. Poor guy. I wonder what Kai talked with Ruki. Ruki must have given him some hints to make it possible for Kai to assume that he is connected to Reita as his shield-bearer..
Oooh yeah, Hiroto SHOULD feel suspicious
Haha, you solved the scene differently! Nothing much to say about that except that he tries to hide from Reita and himself that he is liking him.
Oh~~~~! There is Tora xD wrote this above too fast lol
xDDD! The weather lol
But I like that Tora collected himself and is now the smart guy again. But as I told you already, I don't think that Toras apologizes and the tear in the end do really fit him in this scene. (I mean I can understand why you wrote it but something inside me says it's not suiting)
BUt I like Toras little confession ^___^
OMG!! xDDDD Miyavi as guard for prisoners!! That's awesome xD
lol I SO can imagine that probably Miyavi will be more annoying for the prisoners then the other way around xDDD but he stunned Shou. Good job! xD
Tora~ *cheers* xDD'' the start with who wasat the stairway first is a great beginning for their little fight <3 and you mad Uruha see it directly xD maaaan how clear has Tora to be for Uruha to realize his feelings? xDD
it is KAI IT IS KAI xDDDD~ one of my 52358451 guesses lol
aaaw~ their is their conversation <333 you make me happy <3~
lol 'no evil in his eyes' xDD poor Ruki, betrayed by Kai
Aw... looks like Ruki WILL help him but not in the way he thinks
duh.. I dont want to be at Sagas place. Must be tough to be blamed either way you react. But actually... I think Aoi has to understand that it is on his own if you will love again or not. He is too depandent in some ways. And moreover.. I think if Saga would think about it and give the people options (talk to them then just answeing) things could become different..
oookay.. so far. Maybe not my best comment xD''' but the sun delated everything today xD'' sorry <33
but it's great *__* I enjoyed reading!
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hahaha yeah you did get the scene you hoped for =D RukixKai from now on >DDD (but will it be KaixRuki???) and as I expected: you saw what I am planning to do (your task to find out what I am meaning now >D can't tell you everything, isn't fun for me XD;;)
*grin* yeah, though I don't see why Tora is clever now and wasn't in chap 5, but guess that it has to do with his "nonchalant" jealous attitude towards Uruha XD;;
The tear was cause Uruha did not understand him, and still doesn't. Uru is a true dork in this fic XD;;
Yeah I pity the prisoners as well XDDD imagine Myv guarding your door, he'd be talking all the time, or telling you to shut up XD;; would become truly annoying.
(he may guard my door though XD;;;)
yeah well Kai also looks innocent XD and the way he acts: who would have thougth he is what he is? XD;; (and now I refer back to that "guess what you guessed right" part XD" )
Ahuh more about Sagas past will come, but this was actually more important for Sagas "being" then I made it seem, but it is partial an explanation for why he decided to drop his emotions. Saga is actually someone to pity as well, that was also what I meant with that he and Aoi have things in common.
haha no comments about Aois past? wow that surprises me XD; was it so bad?
And Aoi just wants to know if he'll meet someone or not, first he did look for his love on his own, but since he did not find anyone in years, he decided to go to Saga after all ^^....but yes he is a bit depended
well I like your comments, as I said, and it may maybe not be your best: it is your longest and I like, no I love: long comments X3
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